Aww, Veemon's personality shines through here! So adorable. He always was my favourite partner of 02 :) [Also, I just can't write his name anything but Veemon. It ... it just looks nicer to me]
It is interesting to see how a digimon views digivolution and here is how you maintain Veemon's outlook on life and the world so well!
I still think that the third paragraph could have had a better leading line. Maybe the "however" makes it sound weaker? In general I prefer the other two paragraphs to XVeemon's, they just sounded better. The third one sounds a bit too clinical almost, even if it has the wings! The wings! So cute!
Hm, though the sentence before "It was how he saved the world" is missing a full stop. Point. Dot. I forgot which one is correct.
My favourite one is the Lighdramon paragraph. I like Veemon thinking about his bond with Daisuke and that he "probably shouldn't mention that to [him]" xd
Perfect ending line though, fly Veemon, fly!

Aw~! This was really cute~!

EABB.