| Reviews for Pursuit |
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shitnazugawa chapter 18 . 7/31 Chrom is just...so precious nobody deserves him |
Numinous-Alqua chapter 39 . 6/16/2019 Ah! That chapter killed me! Robin really needs to destress. Lol |
Firegirl19 chapter 39 . 6/11/2019 Finally I've been waiting for this for soo long. I know this is slow build story but I personally enjoy the pacing. I enjoyed this chapter it was lighthearted like a little filler episode. I really can't wait to see how everything plays between Chrom and Robin especially when she's tells him about her father organization. |
Cloy552 chapter 39 . 6/11/2019 Dorks. |
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 39 . 6/10/2019 This was a nice slow chapter. Your work is always worth the wait. |
Firegirl19 chapter 38 . 4/5/2019 Musical Ribbons I really love your story. I absolutely love Robin's character. I feel like she's me in this story. I hope you updated again soon I want to see Robin and Chrom take that vacation. I also hope that Lon'qu finds a woman that'll understand and accept him for who he is. |
Firegirl19 chapter 15 . 4/1/2019 Hey I just started reading your story I just wanna say that I love it so far. I love both Robin's and characterization in the story it fits them very and makes them relatable too. This chapter really made me feel bad for Robin especially with Priam coming in to the picture. The lack of freedom Robin gets right now in the story is pretty much unbearable and she's only in her early 20s and Priam only makes things worse for her. Seriously feel bad for Robin because I have the similar feelings of what's going on in my life right now. With always being told what to do and people getting in the way it feels like we can't really do anything for ourselves. Robin in the story really touched me on a deep level. You've done a really amazing job her character and this story. I wanted to say thank you for this because it brings me joy know that there's something out there in a story can relate to and understand it's readers. I can't wait to see how the story ends. I hope Robin finally gets her happy ending and freedom that she deserves :) |
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 38 . 2/3/2019 Always great to see a new update for this! I think it could have used another once-over for proofreading, but the typos don't detract much. Great work as always. |
Cloy552 chapter 38 . 2/3/2019 Poor things. |
Numinous-Alqua chapter 38 . 2/3/2019 Gah! How I missed this story! They’re so damn cute together! And Lon’que. lol. Love him! |
friedkimchilover chapter 38 . 2/2/2019 Aghhhhhh! You’re back! I thought this story was abandoned! I’m happy you’re back. Good chapter. You’re writing is great as usual. I really wonder what’s gonna happen next. I can’t wait to see the next update to pursuit and sunflower! |
Ale VK chapter 38 . 2/2/2019 omg! thank you so much! i really miss this amazing fanfic! i like the pancake situations!. i feel bad for chrom and robin, i hope they find a solution. i'll always wait you updates! Sorry for my English... Greetings from Mexico! |
friedkimchilover chapter 37 . 5/25/2018 Great writing as usual! This chapter was lots of fun. I’m pleased to see Lonqu again but I’m curious as to what will happen next! With your question, when I’m burned out I usually just take a break. Sit back and just gather yourself and have a moment. And when you feel like you can and your ready, then jump back into the fray! But take your time. The mind needs to rest. I hope you’ll recover soon. Please take care of yourself. Keep up the great work! |
FicReader chapter 37 . 5/25/2018 That last line of the chapter... I love it! When I'm burned out writing papers I usually do "me time." Taking a break and doing things you love for an hour or whole day. You only think on what you're doing and not on papers or schoolwork. It's all you time. Anyway, Lon'qu! Glad to see you're back :) I feel Lon'qu believes he won't be much of a bodyguard to Robin anyway with Chrome in the picture. Despite dating a cop, he probably feels his working relationship ( I have no clue what to call it) will be compromised in more ways than one. Man, I'm glad to finish this chapter today. Got some stressors in my life too today and this was a great break for. Until the next chapter! |
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 37 . 5/19/2018 I really enjoyed this chapter. The last couple chapters got me just starting to feel like Chrom and Lon'qu had been somewhat sidelined, but you thoroughly dispelled that fear here. It's great to see both of them getting a little more involved in Robin's affairs, especially since Lon'qu doesn't know much about her recent endeavors and Chrom's been hitting dead ends in his case. I've never been able to muster up the drive to maintain what I'd consider a good upload schedule myself, so I can't say I'm brimming with tips. Try to focus on the aspects of writing that you enjoy the most, and don't make excuses to get out of writing if you know the alternatives will leave you less satisfied. |