Great story

Just can't agree with saying there is nothing to forgive. Reasons at start were good, but keeping it up that long not. Lying isn't ever right. It just took Me little out of story. But in general, I enjoyed reading this fic. I just see they both need to accept their mistakes and that will make them stronger.

Just can't agree with saying there is nothing to forgive. Reasons at start were good, but keeping it up that long not. Lying isn't ever right. It just took Me little out of story. But in general, I enjoyed reading this fic. I just see they both need to accept their mistakes and that will make them stronger.

I so hoped Rayna would have told in this, but liked that part of Maddie investigating.

Dont exactly get that reason to drink then, but maybe it just was the only coping mechanism for him then and didnt really think the consequences. Other than that, I loved this chapter! Its so nice to read how different things could have gone with different choices.

Yep, that love never stopped and that Song brought it to surface. Great Job with this!

Great ending ! Love love loved the Bluebird scene !

Great story! And a fine finish. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Them reuniting at the blue bird was perfection... and oh so hot. So many wonderful pieces of the show and flashbacks were worked into this resolution as well. I'm always a fan of your writing, but this might have been my favorite story. So much angst and build. The idea of them going on that tour was brilliant and surely would have changed the trajectory of the show. Thanks for taking us on that journey!

Beautiful ending.
I will miss this story :)

I really enjoyed this story start to finish. Sorry it's over but great ending.

Yay! So happy you finally finished this. Still absolutely one of my favourite Deyna stories ever. Really wonderful work :-) Can't wait for your next one!

That was f**king perfect! I feel like falling in love right now!
Maybe one more chapter or a different story while recording? Just saying! Congrats!

That was so so good thank you so much! I am glad it ended on a high note

That was the perfect ending. You figured it out easily! Hope the show writers nail it as well! Thanks for the reading entertainment! Great story.