This story was absolutely amazing! One of the best that I have ever read. You completely nailed each character’s personalitiy/quirk. Alison, Spencer and Hanna were written especially perfect. I loved how you combined their present with past so we were able to get fetus PLL and also the girls older too. Amazing story, so well thought out, and so perfectly executed! It made me feel all the feels and it was so great that I actually mixed up the show with your writing. Great work. My favorite of them all

I love flustered Emily. So adorable. Glad Emily remembered. Wish Alison had gotten to get Emily off. With a strap. ;)

Is Emily actually mad?

Lol. Typical Alison. So I don’t get why maya wanted to kill Alison. And I thought she really loved Emily?

Damn this is a lot. How long did it take you to think this out? And where does Maya play into all this?

Oh shit.

Why did Emily call call Hanna “Hefty Hanna”?! Like why?! They should have such a tight friendship.

I was going to ask why not make it CeCe like in the show but then I remember this fic was written four years ago. Great chapter. :)

So Hanna and Alison and Alison and Spencer. Damn.

Would love to see Alison take Emily with a strap. ;)

I hope Alison will top more. I like when she takes charge and takes Emily. Cuz Emily is a bottom. ;)

Love how Alison was Emily’s first time. I love stories like that. :)

It was good before it stopped to be a time traveler fic. The first part was useless in the end.
What a waste because it was the only good one

Just as good as years ago

best one yet

Kisses -A