Percy's OOC but in character at the same time.
I like.

can I just say this is amazing the story and you are one of the best writers ever !

I love this chapter, but I just felt compelled to say that when Tyson said, "But Big Brother doesn't want to have fins. He also doesn't want to have titles," I read the last bit as, "He also doesn't want to have titties." And then I promptly broke into hysterics. I'm sorry. I felt you needed to know that.

by the way, I love the reference love this story too!

U ARE BRILLIANT

mate please update i am begging u

This is a really good you should change the names and publish it

Sorry to bring this up now, because I forgot, but in HoO Riordan writes about Nyx being a child of Chaos, not a sister. The whole concept you made with the Protogenos, is completely wrong; wrong in a sense that it did not come from the book (as I believe.)

Annabeth is the retriever of the Athena Parthenos, not Percy.

bro. this is such a good story. i was about to not read it bc i though it was too long but i am so glad i did read it.

I rlly hope Bob gets saved

I like the story but the personality for everyone is just so different x-x it's nice anyway though

I like this percy

Thank you for not making Bob... evil.

Can I just tell you how much I love this story! Everything about it was awesome! I'm really looking forward to reading the oneshots that you made for it. Also I love how you ended this part!