Continue and update please soon.

Yeah... two things. First; Ruby would absolutely not have had the required machinery to make a collapsible battle axe in what is essentially pre-renaissance Europe. Secondly, titanium is not a good material for swords or knives or axes. It’d not stronger than steel, it’s just lighter and better under higher temperatures. It’s essentially just aluminum, it’s brittle as heck, requires constant sharpening, can’t hold an edge worth a damn, and doesn’t temper, you’d be better off with work-hardened bronze or even just pig iron.

I like where this story is going enough to ignore where she’s getting her ammunition, but this was just patently false.

this was extremely well Written and I love this depiction of an older Ruby. I know it's extremely unlikely given the massive time gap but I sincerely hope you decide to continue this... there are not nearly enough Good stories where Ruby gets sent to another world much less any beyond 2 or 3 "chapters" and over 5k words...

I really wanna see how this story goes on so I hope to see an update soon

So is this another original story story dead too?

Will you continue this story?

The sentences run on longer than Ruby does. Please add some periods in your story.

Wow this is really good hope you can continue this in the future.

I like this story and hope you continue. Some reviews were stating about grammar issues, but good story telling can exist if if grammar is lacking. Another about gunpowder. Westeros probably has the resources just not the knowledge. Since ruby comes from remnant where guns are commonplace she would know how and would simply need to find the materials.

Hope we get to see the rest of Team RWBY and Team JNR (may Pyrrha rest in peace) in the next chapter.

A metaphor, and I know you probably get this a lot but let me have this one.
This story is like a chocolate cake, delicious icing, it’s got brownies and chocolate chips in it, and there’s a pool of melted chocolate in the middle, freakin delish...only it looks like shit. So fucking good but it looks so bad. I love this, don’t get me wrong, but please, PLEASE, work on your writing skills!

Not bad.

I'm liking the story, but the punctuation (or rather, lack there of) and the constant redundancy are really getting on my nerves here. Seriously; how are you writing a story this well thought out, but then making such basic mistakes as that? Come on!

ok

Good parts:
* It's readable
* It has a cohesive plot
Bad parts:
* Some parts seem really rushed and it seems like you're writing what you're remembering, then thinking "Oh and I should also add this and this". And then that's how you write it into the text instead of making it flow. That kind of thing and the "etc. etc" really break the flow of the story.
* Ruby is beginning to act like a one-story-fix-it girl. The only thing I'm surprised is that she didn't save Lyanna while she was at it, otherwise she did everything else.
* The Night Watch was resolved way too fast. It deserved a dialogue, it deserved a description, it deserved... a lot more. What you're describing are monumental events for the history of Westeros and the world that don't come close even to Aerys' or Robert's canonical deaths, Joffrey's crazy, Melisandre's magic (and crazy) or Daenery's dragons. This is literally an alien invasion by God-empowered necromancer elves whose motto is "All men must die" and it was resolved by "everyone's talked it out and everything's cool now".
Look, I'm not flaming and I appreciate the work you did to put this into writing and to update it, but some of these things really grate me.