| Reviews for The First Apprentice |
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   Lilly-daughter of Radolso chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 *grins* -LDR |
| Ranger-of-the-shadows chapter 9 . 5/10/2018 I love it. |
| PilindielTheElf chapter 9 . 6/15/2017 This is a great story. When is the next chapter/page coming? |
| KentuckyMacFuck chapter 4 . 1/14/2017 I really like this so far, not quite as much as your other RA story "Whisper", but it's still nice |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/19/2016 Loved it |
| TrustTheCloak chapter 9 . 11/30/2015 I loved the last few pieces of dialogue... So funny! Of course Gistik would give them laundry. Keep up the great work! |
| TrustTheCloak chapter 8 . 10/27/2015 I love the Gilan sass. :D |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/15/2015 This story is amazing plz update! |
| Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 7 . 10/10/2015 Looking forward to the chapters coming up! |
| Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 1 . 10/10/2015 Oh I am loving this story! I totally agree with you that more stories about Gilan are needed! Keep up the good work! |
| RiderofRanger chapter 7 . 10/7/2015 NOOOOO! YOU LEAVE ME THERE! Awwww, man... Okay, so first off. Gilan is awesome. Such a funny little kid. Halt is well...Halt. I love how you got his character right! Second...How did they get into the tower? And how did they catch Crowley? A little info there would be helpful. Third...Why is Gilan tied to a table? It sounds like they are going to torture him and there is NO WAY he will get ANY rest tied to a table. Maybe you should have a blanket on him or maybe tied to a bed. (just a suggestion) Yeah...well that's about all i can think of at the current moment. Great fanfic! Can't wait until the next update! |
| aqaws321 chapter 7 . 10/6/2015 hm... what's this? Have I stumbled upon a rare Gilan-as-an-apprentice story? And with a plot and recent updates, no less! And, as the cherry on the top, it's actually pretty well-written! Hi! I've read your story up to this point in one sitting, (it's pretty interesting), and I can't wait for you to continue. However, I do have a question. 1. How old is Gilan in this? You said second year, but sometimes apprentices start at different points in their lives. Now, I also have a couple pieces of advice for you. You seem to be making Gilan seem rather... immature in this. I do realize that he's young, and therefore not the most mature, but he seems to be almost babyish at some points. Also, make sure you watch the spelling of things, especially the words "their, there, they're" and "your, you're". Those can be rather tricky. I do like the humor and cannot wait for another installment of this. Continue the amazing work! CF13 |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2015 Pleeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeeee pretty please update soon! |
| Gwen chapter 6 . 7/22/2015 This is amazing! Gilan is awesome and you are a really good writer! Please update soon! |
| silveroakleaf chapter 6 . 7/14/2015 This was great! |
