Don’t get me wrong, I really love this story, especially how the queens and Jane and Heidi handled the situations and revelations, but, in this chapter, Bella’s ungratefulness is starting to grate on my nerves. I mean, how can you not see how caring and considerate they are, considering that you are faced with the rulers of the vampire world. They’ve been so lenient on agreeing to go with your every whims even if it hurted them... I just... I really want to shake some sense with dear Bella here.

On other note, This story is just fantastic, Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us, can’t wait to read more chapters! 3

As much as I like your story I can't stand reading Isabella's ridiculous obsession with this so called bond with fuckward. (Gahh I can't stand Edward). Otherwise good story

What the he'll ever happened to this story?

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Great job, I like how you portrayed the Queens.

Update please

I know it’s been a few years since you have written on your stories here, I do hope you continue this story though. It’s really good.

Me encanta, actualiza por favor!

I know it's been awhile but please read! I really enjoyed this story especially at the beginning when you will flushing out the characters. However by the end you have whiny Bella who goes all weak in the knees over seeing the Cullens after what they did to her. "What if I don't want to come back?" Kinda makes Bella lame. WHAT I WOULD LOVE TO READ! WHAT I WOULD PAY TO READ... they all return to forks(minus edward) and Bella becomes stronger and needs no validation from the Cullens anymore because she now loves Heidi and Jane and understands the mate pull. Because of this strength she becomes more outgoing and take charge... she gets closer to the Cullen siblings because they see how much better she is doing with jane/Heidi than could always have Carlisle be the protagonist and not like jane/Heidi Bella cuz he wants Bella to go get Edward back and love him. Have Carlisle fail miserably at this...every time he brings up a memory of Edward or comments how he misses Edward because he was so good at (whatever)...never have any 9f the three girls shoot him down, instead have family members flit in and completely destroy Carlisle characterizati9n with a bad thing Edward did. Also show everyone trying to get back into the swing of things and with jane and Heidi it could be funny and great. Would also love 'the pack's to get along with Heidi and Jane and accept their relationship which can 9pen many new doors... have Jane and Heidi save 3 patrolling wolves, like Sam, Jake, Jared from a good number of vamps (Jane and Heidi do have powers) and that would make them grow closer together. Have Edward escape and build an army to kill his whole family...that could be before Bella is turned or after she is turned and a real badass so Edward has no hope. But I would like to see it end with Bella with her mother's in the volturi. There's just some ideas I would love to read...I'd pay to read a story about this. I know it's been 2 years but if your up to it I'll read whatever you post

please come back to this story

Pick up the pace :’( this slow burn is too slow

Guh I wanna hit Bella!

She’s so ignorant

Please update some day soon. This is a great story even though Bella is frustrating.

My God.
This Bella is really really really annoying as fuck!
I don't know how many times i wanted to just strangle her in 10 chapters...
I hope Author will update soon since it's been so long and that this Bella will get better.
And i have one question: Since when does Bella care about Charlie?
All she ever said was that he's awkward and she's awkward as well so there is nothing to talk about.
She gets into trouble with James and insults him to death because she has to go away as a cover.
She could've do that a little softer without repeating the same words her mother said to him when she left years ago! WTF She used to old pain her father felt against him. I think that was a little too much even for acting sake. She just expects him to forgive her when she's back...
Then she goes in a semi coma when she gets dumped by Edward and leaves her father ONCE AGAIN worried about her well being not giving a fuck about how a father would feel seeing his daughter throwing her life away living like a zombie.
So my question again is: Since when does she give a crap about Charlie's feelings?
In this story she's obsessed about going back to him but WHY?
I think he'll be more than happy WITHOUT such a shitty daughter who doesn't give a fuck about him around.
He'll be more happy and free if she just faked her death immediately or just died for real!
Fuck you Bella.
I hope the Bella in this story will really get better or i'll end up wanting to punch something by the end...
The Canon Bella is the shittiest.
Bah.

Hey this gonna get an update? It's really good?