I love this story very much, it's perfect, thanks for writing it

Good job with the actual story and all, but was a lot of this inspired by Warriors? By Erin Hunter? Because you were using terms like deputy, warrior(s), and someone asked Ed if he wanted to take charge of being a medicine something or other? Anyway, good job with everything else, just was curious about the warriors thing.

The same as the rest of the story so far: AWESOME! :)

More! More!

You should totally continue! It has been a really gripping story so far! Plz plz plz don’t end it! :)

Hey guys, please read this: This story will be continued. Please do not ask when the next chapter is. I got a lot of fanfics that I'm currently working on. This story will be worked on when I get back it. For now, please wait, I will write chapter 8 when I can and upload it when I can.

I also got a life and I work.

When is next chapter comming? :C

Love chapter 1-5! Try to involve Shenzi giving birth to her pup in chapter six! Please...!

I have read chapter 1-5 was really chapter 6 pleas!

I hope you update it soon!

I love it

Make a continuing chapter I want to see what happens if Shenzi and Banzai have a pup will they go back and fight him or will they obey him and become evil hyenas once more?

I love your fanfiction's

Please keep making lion king fanfictions about Shenzi and Banzai falling in love, I love them please keep making them reading them is my life!

Pretty good, nice, long well written