Reviews for Steven Universe: The New Crystal Gems Team |
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redstonepowder chapter 1 . 2/2 Perhaps you should go and rewrite this. The idea is great but the lack of detail and worldbuilding along with the NPC-esque dialogue makes it a jarring experience to read. |
lila thunderstorm chapter 4 . 7/12/2019 Sorry, this is a lovely story and the plot is really sweet, but please try to fix your grammar (and add more sensory images in between and stuff). It is just getting really difficult to understand your sentences. However, I still love the storyline! |
lila thunderstorm chapter 3 . 7/11/2019 Adorable |
lila thunderstorm chapter 2 . 7/11/2019 Cute |
lila thunderstorm chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 Nice fic. I cant wait for a redemption arc for Jasper and Peridot |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 Ha ha ha... You got a cute writing style. |
Arianna Antoine chapter 10 . 5/28/2018 That's okay I know how ya feel, English is my second language too. ( I prefer to speak Haitian.) |
j.c chapter 1 . 2/22/2018 great work please oh please make more for your fans like me |
SilverInTheShadows chapter 3 . 2/12/2018 Okay, so the plotline you have is really good! However, I think some parts need editing. The dialogue (which is always pretty tricky to right) could probably be looked over, try to avoid over using words such as said. Aside from that, this is brilliant! |
Michael flores chapter 28 . 8/19/2017 Nice job dude I wanted a story like this so thanks for making it |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/22/2017 Huh!Funny,I also ship lapidot. Lapis and Peri make the cutest couple! |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2017 So many grammar mistakes... The quality of your Story is suffering because of it. |
CcaramelCutie chapter 17 . 6/24/2017 BEACH CITY IS A SMALL TOWN WITH HUGE MYSTERIES. T-H-E-C-R-Y-S-T-A-L-G-E-M-S. STEVEN, PEARL, GARNET, LAPISLAZULI, PERIDOT, JASPER, AMETHYST, THEY HAVE STRANGE AND POWERFUL POWERS. |
stevconnie chapter 8 . 2/3/2017 more steven coniie fusions also what is wrong wit ur spellin |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2017 i think steven should fuse with peridot or lapiz |