Reviews for Steven Universe: The New Crystal Gems Team
redstonepowder chapter 1 . 2/2
Perhaps you should go and rewrite this. The idea is great but the lack of detail and worldbuilding along with the NPC-esque dialogue makes it a jarring experience to read.
lila thunderstorm chapter 4 . 7/12/2019
Sorry, this is a lovely story and the plot is really sweet, but please try to fix your grammar (and add more sensory images in between and stuff). It is just getting really difficult to understand your sentences. However, I still love the storyline!
lila thunderstorm chapter 3 . 7/11/2019
Adorable
lila thunderstorm chapter 2 . 7/11/2019
Cute
lila thunderstorm chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
Nice fic. I cant wait for a redemption arc for Jasper and Peridot
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Ha ha ha...

You got a cute writing style.
Arianna Antoine chapter 10 . 5/28/2018
That's okay I know how ya feel, English is my second language too. ( I prefer to speak Haitian.)
j.c chapter 1 . 2/22/2018
great work please oh please make more for your fans like me
SilverInTheShadows chapter 3 . 2/12/2018
Okay, so the plotline you have is really good! However, I think some parts need editing. The dialogue (which is always pretty tricky to right) could probably be looked over, try to avoid over using words such as said. Aside from that, this is brilliant!
Michael flores chapter 28 . 8/19/2017
Nice job dude I wanted a story like this so thanks for making it
Guest chapter 14 . 7/22/2017
Huh!Funny,I also ship lapidot. Lapis and Peri make the cutest couple!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2017
So many grammar mistakes... The quality of your Story is suffering because of it.
CcaramelCutie chapter 17 . 6/24/2017
BEACH CITY IS A SMALL TOWN WITH HUGE MYSTERIES. T-H-E-C-R-Y-S-T-A-L-G-E-M-S. STEVEN, PEARL, GARNET, LAPISLAZULI, PERIDOT, JASPER, AMETHYST, THEY HAVE STRANGE AND POWERFUL POWERS.
stevconnie chapter 8 . 2/3/2017
more steven coniie fusions also what is wrong wit ur spellin
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2017
i think steven should fuse with peridot or lapiz
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