You should write a sequel about how Avery breaks free from Karl; possibly by Wes returning as a rebel or part of a separate entity altogether. I believe that would go over well.

So sad! I hope this is a two-shot! Question: did Karl... Kill Avery?

Wow o.o

It was cute, sometimes reading things that are dark are interesting. My pairing really is Karl & Avery. They just complement each other in smarts. The most unlikely pair, are usually the greatest.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you.

Oh don't worry I'm not afraid of anything good story bye the way ;)

Wow...deep story! I really liked it, especially how mysterious everything was. I mean, you could figure out what was going on pretty easily, but it was written in such a fashion that it seemed kind of like a mystery story, you know? I really liked this one-shot!

I'm glad I read this in the morning, so now I have time to get over it before dark. WHOA! I think I need to sit down. This was so intense! I loved it, though. What really amazes me, despite one edit, I can find no mistakes. You're a good writer! Wow, evil Avery. Mrs. Queen of Pasadena. The blood on the dress got to me though. Wow, keep up the good work!

I remember that episode. Forgot the title of it though. Anyways, very interesting story! I liked it! Evil Karl intrigues me . . . is it weird I can totally imagine him manipulating Avery? :P

Oh my goodness. It's so cute.

Omg a dark story about Kavery! Its gonna be very interesting to see where this story goes! Im excited! Well it looks like Karl did something to Avery to change her. I can't wait to find out how he did it. (Btw the episode where Karl said he that taking over Pasadena will more than suffice is"Avery dreams of kissing Karl just thought i should let you know lol) Can't wait to see what happens next! :)