Update please. I love that story :)

Keep writing please

OMG I LOVE THIS! MELLIVIA IS MY OTP SO THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY! I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

I have to admit, I'm an olitz shipper all the way, but I'm willing to give it a try. Good so far

It's a good story so far. The lesbian twist is different, but not uncommon, I've seen a few other Olivia/mellie stories on here and all are interesting. I like how you've written their relationship, it's very endearing and the family unit is great and believable. Did you have to kill off my Fitz? Lol, jk. Can't wait to read more.

Why didn't they go to the school and deal with bullies? Olivia is a police officer for goodness sake.

Love it :)

You shouldn't be nervous to post your story because it's yours to tell, but as any artist will tell you, flack comes with the territory. That being said I must admit I'm one of those that just don't get the Mellivia pairings. I tried to read it, but couldn't cause I can't imagine these two together. It's well written so I'm sure you'll find an audience.

Great story please continue

The more Mellivia the better I say. This is interesting cause we see family life, most stories here don't go into that. Cant wait for the next chapter :)