Such a well written, sad sorry.

The ending is perfect, I loved watching Joanna grow up through the story and how much she changed is amazing. Sad to see it end but you did a wonderful job!

I'm so sad this story is over! I wonder if Tyrion would have spared Joanna from Daenerys' wrath if he knew who Loren's real father was. Hopefully in the sequel you will tell us what happened to Jaime and Cersei!

Story was well shit

I wonder if Dany will keep this promise

I am glad that Loras got her out of there

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Plot twist! Although did Olenna tell? Lancel wouldn't have known unless he overheard Joanna and Loras talk, and why didn't he turn in Cersei before Joanna?

Great chapters

I do hope someone kills those Faith Militant jerks very soon.!

Great story so far. ( I hate the high Sparrow so I hope you have a really nasty end in mind for him. ) Love Loras in this. : )

What about the Heir to Highgarden Lord Willas and the second son Garlan ? Loras was the Third son !

When we write the chapter is as long as it needs ti be. To force extra words out is counter productive. Likewise to use fewer words than needed to complete a chapter because of an artificial limit can be equally awkward. I wish I knew how to publish from the Notes section. : b

Dear JB-
I've really enjoyed this story, so much that I'm sorry to hear that it's coming to an end. I read somewhere that many of your readers detest Joanna. I'm not one of them. I found it fascinating to read the GOTs story from the other side- I love how you intertwined passages from the original book into your story. You say you've lost inspiration for this story, and I understand. However, I'm a journalist, an editor, and I know a good story when I see one. Most of the GOTs fan fictions I've read are crap. When I stumbled upon this one, I was amazed. The dialogue needs some work, and the chapters are too short, but you have brought the character of Joanna Baratheon to life. Joanna Baratheon is not an embellishment on a creation of Mr. Martin's, but a creation of yours alone. Please do not abandon her. Best of luck to you. This character, as well as this storyline, has wonderful potential.

Sincerely,
Kellie Maestri

So sad that Joffrey couldn't see his daughter, but I'm sure Loras will be a better father anyway.