Noooooooooooooooooooooooo please tell me the next is coming soon!

I love this and you have to update

Awwww, Dylan being an ass came in handy for once.

I'll be sure to check out your stories. I'll be commenting as either Lady_Artemis_ or WICKED-Is_Good.

Great chap

no words but omg...:)

Poor Brodie

yes they should meet but what are you going to do about dylan you should have brude fight dylan because he trys to take olivia and she should also win dylan should also leave and brake olivias hart by telling her hes her fother and also say but your no daughter of mine because you still have fangs geans. im sorry i have to hate dylan evrything was perfict till he came he should date max2 and they should have ther own baby. :) :p

nice :)

Awe the poor girls

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update on fangs fallen angle and post it on T more people would read it but put it in the title that it could be rated m plz just try it i love it and you just stoped im begging you!

I love the new story idea! :) can't wait to find out what happens next. (I guess technically I can, but I don't want to cause I'm super excited for a new story!)

Keep it going.

omg keep writeing i wos goig to write a story like this but i realized i was beond tariblie at writeing storys so far i love it the only thing i dont like is the good twin eval twin thing insted of that you should have them go thru the truble of taking care of the babys when they find them they should be like 3 days old and a old cupple has ben takeing care of them since there 3 days old there going to need brest milk its nacheral and rated T means that you can have stuff like that i rilly hope u use my idea i will keep on updateing and trowing ideas at you oh you should have fangs baby be a girl with black hair and black eyes but with tanish paleish skin like max and black wings the boy he should have golden blond hair sparkiling blue eyes but with maxes skin again and with maxes and dylins wings mixes so it would be white with brown dosent mader the patteren so like i was saying befor i really hop you dont use the good twin bad twin thax bye :) ps that was so long i could probly play nudge :)

Good job so far if like to see where this goes