| Reviews for Sweet Song |
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StRAngE ToASt chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Absolutely adorable ending! Seriously! Like Pokémon Conquest itself, why doesn't this get the attention it deserves? This is pretty good! |
Imperator Justinian chapter 1 . 5/21/2015 Well, this was an interesting one-shot, and it's nice to see a simple Conquest friendship since they're so uncommon. I think you handled Oichi's emotions and uncertainties over being useless very well, which again is something I rarely see in the Conquest fandom (something I should probably focus on more, too), and it was just a heartwarming story all round. The two criticisms I can offer are that it came off a bit sudden as being the Heroine's point of view, and the Heroine calling Oichi Ichi. Besides those negligible details, this was a pretty good one-shot. I would actually beg to differ on Oichi being weak, though; Jigglypuff's Doubleslap is a pretty powerful move in early and mid-game. Ironically enough, I think she's the only Warlord who decreases in strength after her perfect link evolves since Wigglytuff has pretty much the same attack as Jigglypuff, but since Hyper Voice only hits once as opposed to Doubleslap, she's pretty much is relegated to holding down banners or chokepoints due to Wigglytuff's massive HP. |