| Reviews for May Our Hearts Be Forever Entwined |
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SupaChenz AA chapter 13 . 5/13 woohoo! This is awesome |
fiahy567 chapter 13 . 1/18 Update please |
samjordon08 chapter 13 . 11/13/2019 This story is excellent and I would love to see new chapters soon. I haven't seen many Harry/Fleur fanfics around, even less that are complete I would hate to see this remain incomplete. |
blackcatcoffe chapter 4 . 4/14/2019 Viktor the savage |
Anubis Darkmoon chapter 13 . 2/6/2019 This is a great story! I love it so much. Just a couple inconsistencies here and there. Like the fact that in the first chapter you say Harry has Hedwig but in this chapter you say he has no owl at all. Other than that, it’s an amazing story and I couldn’t put it down! Keep it up! Hope you update soon! |
andrewswings chapter 8 . 1/25/2019 i rarely feel strongly in fanfiction but that dream made me want to punch my computer in rage i have only ever had that feeling once or twice before |
CNelson117 chapter 13 . 7/11/2017 I'm really enjoying this take on the twin Potters, especially with you taking your time progressing Harry's relationship with Fleur. One thing bothered me though. Earlier in the story you mentioned that Fleur was anxious about how Harry would react to her Veela form, which is why she was reluctant to get intimate. But then she just up and does this. Did she get over her fears or did Harry's patronus allay her fears? |
mckertis chapter 4 . 3/1/2017 More repeats ! Just how much milk can you squeeze from a single tit ? |
mckertis chapter 3 . 3/1/2017 You seem to have a knack for describing the same bloody events several times in a row, for no good reason that i can see. |
Nyxium chapter 13 . 2/3/2017 I love it, it's so hard to fine good Harryxfleur story's. I look forward to chapter 14 my dear Author. |
Dylan314 chapter 1 . 2/4/2017 I won't say much other then . .Awesome . Just can't wait for next installment . ~Blondheadcharmer. |
lordamnesia chapter 13 . 1/30/2017 A very well put together story. Harry isn't super buthurt about his family, he didn't run away, just was neglected. Keep up the fantastic work! |
hawkswench chapter 13 . 1/19/2017 Happy New Year to you. Not sure why anyone would be upset as before they entered the room, Fleur and Harry were planning revenge on Sirius. But then this is the internet and too many people get their butt hurt over the stupidest things. |
SSSra chapter 13 . 1/16/2017 great story i like how you have portrayed harry and his arrogant brothers personalities as so different then in most wbwl stories as them not being solved after the third task is over. i like the pairing and hope to see harry and fleur getting together in a more permanent relationship such as betrothed or even married as that would upset his brother more then anything. i have added your story to my fave follow lists |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 13 . 1/13/2017 This chapter is amazingly hot! |