I have no comments about the legend name

I think I'm becoming a fanboy of your fics lol

Great chapter! I throughly enjoyed the ending even if it was a bit abrupt.

That was pretty damn good, could just be I have a thing for a good omen speaker though.

I like your story and think it has a neat premise. I do however sometimes have trouble understanding who is speaking when you have multiple lines of dialogue in the same paragraph.

honestly i thought the legendary would have been one of the sinnoh ones. i mean control over space time and dimensions seems almost too perfect considering his equipment

I am surprised, this doesn't really seem like your other stories. I liked your explanation on why nukes wouldn't work

Found this to be a really interesting premise, hope you continue it.

I hope you will give it a go on your own.

Personally I see no reason to change its name or its current development. Keep going and change the meeting point to having missed the other or not acknowledge there ever was another in the story.

Certainly not what i expected but not bad either. Interesting how you had a mercenary group trying to save the world rather than a government. I also like how things went with the police in the pokemon universe

An interesting concept if not slightly dulled by the grammar. I'd say find yourself a Beta to smooth that out first and foremost.

Second on the list: Brevity. You're making jumps in what I assume to be an attempt to fasten the story. Personally I'd say that 2K in a single chapter is somewhat short... but those are mostly my personal tastes I guess.

Still, a bit of narration in the details would be nice, such as when the protagonist went through to the other world, what he thought, or what was going through his head. The jumps from point A to point F without giving much thought to B, C, D, and E, is somewhat anticlimactic.

My advice is you practice this, don't know much other ways to get better at it.

Brevity aside, there's little in the regards to WHY in terms of explanation regarding how the main character was chosen to single-handledly navigate/explore/secure a new spot for the totality of humanity to come along. It'd would've been more reasonable to send at least 4 to 5 people per world at the very least, get some redundancy and multiple opinions before committing all your resources into it.

While we're at it, was there some form of training regarding what each of these scouts was to do? I'm guessing that just sending them their merry way with some equipment would be pretty reckless.

That said, the plot seems to carry some promise of action, there's not much time to go about (unless you're considering time-dilation to be a thing between worlds) and I'm pretty sure the pokegirl world wouldn't appreciate getting a couple billion humans to visit all at once (let's not even go to the potential economical catastrophe that'd be...).

Here's hoping the story pans out appropriately, it certainly has the potential. Hope you've got a new chapter soon, since apparently there aren't enough still-active pokegirl writers going around.

Good luck!

This is a pretty good start, and the first pokegirls story I've seen in awhile that looks like it'll be updated somewhat usually...

There were a few spelling mistakes around abou the the point that supplies were listed.

Also that ending was great.