Okay story, but you should add Grammarly to your browser to prevent grammar mistakes. But again, it was an okay story overall.

I liked this, ‘twas pleasant.

wonderful... i think this is one of the best Harmony fanfics i have ever read.

It was great ate! Great job! I loved it! The kiss part was romantic.. 3 please make another HarMony story.

it was good.

Gucci not plz

The end was a bit maddening to me. I know that not all fanfics have to have a happy ending, I myself have read a lot with sad or tragic ending, even a few great ones end in a good cliffhanger, it's just that I would had liked to know what happened afterwards, to have a sort of closure. Anyway, that was just a wish/thought, now that I know how the one-shot ended, well, that's how it ended.

The story is really great. A bit deep in how the feelings and fears work, and hey, they were younger back then, more immature. Their trust just kept growing in time.

Thanks for sharing it.

well here hoping they ended up together excellent short story