God damn.
This story is amazing, but holy fuck is it sad. Just... Damn.

Keep writing, keep being awesome, and stay safe in these times,
Green

Also, fuck Jason.

This should have so many more favorites! Beautifully written and I love the emotion that you can really feel. Congratulations on a wonderful piece of fanfic! Definitely one of my favorite twin stories.

I liked this story. I liked how you showed war. Because there is nothing beautiful or romantic in it. I liked how your Harry fought and remained faithful to his believes. I liked how you showed that not everything can be fixed and not all wounds can be healed by time. I think that you left enough clues about who let Death Eaters in the castle. But not too many and the story hasn't lost its appeal because of that. And the fate of traitors... Jason illustrates it perfectly. Thank you for this fantastic and yet so realistic story.

It was a nice fic until you allowed MoRon to marry Hermione, however short-lived the marriage was. Harry should have never allowed that poisoner to even date Hermione!

okay, i'm not crying, you're crying. This story was really lovely and well written. A very different WBWL fic that I thoroughly enjoyed, even though I'm crying right now.

Such a beautiful story and even though I hate Jason I almost cried at the end. You have such an amazing way with words keep up the good work.

This is a really good fic. Glad I was able to come across it and read it.

So I'm one of those awful fanfic readers. One of the ones who reads a story, favorites it if it's really good, and mover on. I'm terrible at remembering to review. This story, however, was so good that I had to tell you how fantastic it is. Everything about it fantastic. The plot was a perfect balance between relying on our knowledge of the series and explicit story telling. The execution of an over done cliche made me forget how cliChe it is. In other words, you made the cliche your bitch. In other other words, you made it unique and differentiated it from the other stories. Your characterizations were fantastic. Everyone was in character, and there was even character development that didn't rely on canon development. I just. Wow. That alone is incredible. I should restate to be clearer, you developed your characters appropriately based on the story you were telling, not on JKR's story. And that is incredible. The ending? Astounding. I did not expect that. The foreshadowing definitely pointed at it, but I did not want to believe it. Jason was an amazing OC, and the fact that you made a Harry's twin OC, without making a self insert, is amazing. Your conclusion. Wow. Wow. Wow. Talk about the proper way to end a story, JKR take notes. This was no All Was Well bullshit. You tied up everyone's story line concisely without forcing an ending on their character. Incredible. But the very end? That last little bit? I felt things. I had all the feelings from that little paragraph, and I had to set down my phone and remind myself that it was fiction. Not real. No need to sob over a story. And to top it all off, you did it all with good grammar. Hot damn. A hot commodity in the fanfiction community, you served up good grammar like it was nothing. That sentence made like no sense, but whatever it's fine, it's also 3 am. I feel like I want to rave more about this fucking awesome piece of art, but I don't want to get boring and repetitive. Just know that you have a huge fan in the wide world of the internet, and that your writing it honestly some of the best I've seen. Thank you for gracing us with your prodigious talent.

This is one of the BEST Fanfics I have ever read. Thank you.

Omfg I'm crying! But gosh this story was amazing thank you.

Oh gosh this made me very close to crying, I got teary eyed. I love this story and glad I stumbled across it.

This fic is gorgeous, morbid and dark in all the right ways. I really can't understand the negative review though I do see where the one about this fic being jumpy would come from, though the writing style seemed intentional and it added to the story.

As for the reviewer calling this fic diaplointing for its lack of Harry/hermonie, I have to tell them to politely get to fuck

This could have been an awesome story.
Even with 8 chapters!

Instead it was jumpy and rushed- with bits added, presumably, as you remembered them.

A shame, as it has great promise

A most well-wrought and bittersweet tale. Best "real"-Boy-Who-Lived!Harry vs. " fake"-Boy-Who-Lived!EvilTwin I have ever read.

I really enjoyed this one shot! You did an excellent job. I feel like I should have figured out Jason was going to turn evil. But I, like Harry, believed he could change. Keep up the good work :)