LOL, this was funny. Harry making tantrums to the Grim Reaper is a classic. Thanks for a great fic.

Great start hope to see more soon.

Nice to see a good spate of blackmail.

Not exactly a story, lacking either character or plot development, but it is an interesting premise for one.

Have you considered finishing it?

Interesting idea, but really need to work on grammar. Wow.

That is pretty whack. But as odd as it is, you raised a number of points that cut to the heart of the R28. Harry needs to have GOOD reasons to go back and some of them really don't cut it.

TGM

There we go! An incentive NOT to die. Death in the Harry Potter universe seemed way too attractive in some ways. Why live a life of pain when you could die and join your departed loved ones for eternity? After all, the friends you left behind would join you eventually...

Rather funny! You would benefit from having a beta well-versed in the English language though. This story has been added to Don't Fear The Reaper...reptilia28's Challenge.

The story in itself was amusing.
You would benefit from finding for a beta-reader for any stories you write in the English language, though.

It was amusing. Terribly amusing.