This is rather depressing...Poor Yuki.

To quote an exceptionaly crazy Yuki fan-girl from the culture fest, I'm both relieved and dissapointed. I thought this was the last chapter, I'm glad that I can keep reading this wonderful fic but I'm sad that I have to wait to find out what happens next!

This was such a good chapter! Why was Yuki in Akito's dream? I'm so confused! Is that what Yuki's nightmare is about? He's dreaming of Akito? Well, time to go to media miner!

I'll be writing my review under the penname Tohru819, although I don't like mediaminer's review writing system as much as FFNET's, but that's okay!

Well, I've never said this before and I'll probably never say it again but here it is. Poor Akito! How sad! I was actually crying, for Akito! His story with Yukino is so sweetly sad. But when he said that thing about locking her up, the small part of me that cared for him died. I think that is a very good explanation as to why Akito tortured Yuki when they were young. Because he was so angry with Yukino he took it out on Yuki because he was also the rat.

And that scene with Shigure and Tohru, that was so sweet. Shigure is so kind. _

So you came up with the mother-son relationship between Tohru and Yuki before it happened in FURUBA? How weird! Can Ina-chan read Takaya Natsuki-sensei's mind or something?

Iie! Ina-chan! You tricked me! Again! I thought for sure Yun-chan was back, again! Oh well, I'm so in love with this fic, I don't even mind! That was very confusing for a moment, when Kyo had that dream about Yun-chan and he was Yutta and Kyo-chan was Kyoko.

Oh poor Kyonkitchi can't even live without arguing with Yun-chan. He has pretend arguements with a guy who's in a coma!

Yutta and Kyoko's story is so wonderful! You should make a fic about it! I'd read and review every part of it!

I don't know why but I was really feeling sorry for Akito in the begining, he wasn't acting like his usual evil self. Actually, he reminded me of Yun-chan in "Seven Days" when he went totaly crazy.

But when Akito went back to his usual scheming, evil, minipulating, deceptive self it was easy to hat him again. Hm, so when Akito attacked Yun-chan it was becuase he was mad at Yukino,not Yuki. Well a lot of things make sense that didn't make sense before. But now there are new mysteries, like is Akito REALLY totaly crazy?

Geez this is like reading ASOUE, the more answers you get, the more questions.

Are Haru and Rin getting back together? I hope so, I've changed my mind about Rin. I like her now. I mean, if Haru-chan loves her she can't be all bad, right?

Wow, this fic is getting reeaally interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh but there are only five chapters left! I can't wait to see how it ends, but I think I'll miss reading it when it does end!

Tohru's little sleep walking episode was kinda weird. But I guess she was just dreaming of her two kids like in the dreams she told Shigure about.

Hm, I wonder if Yun-chan will ever wake up. Well the only way to find that out is to keep reading!

I am definatly interested enough to stick around! I can't wait to see what happens next!

That dream that Shigure had was so sad! And now, there is another side story...I'm looking forward to it! This story is such a mystery, I hardly even undertsnd what the heck is even happening during the first half of every chapter! But I still love it!

Kyo-chan is Otosan! How cute! He's such a good father! Hang on Yun-chan and soon you too will be otosan! I wonder, will their son look more like Tohru-kun or Yun-chan? Either way he'll look like a girl...poor Yun-chan, I say such horrible things about you. Hmm, will Yuki still look like a girl when he is older?

So far the story is wonderful, and this chapter was very funny! I should take a brake and read Jyuunishi Enkei no Monogatari, but I can't stop reading this fic! It's so god! I'm going to go keep reading!

Oh wow, that was exciting. I sure didn't expect that, what just happened?

I understand better now that Tohru said that thing about Yukino. That was confusing. Is the Nezumi spirit really a woman named Yukino or is that just something Ina-chan made up for Jyuunishi Enkei no Monogatari? Darn it! I keep doing that, accidentaly reading the sequal before the original. (I read Pursuit of Happiness before reading Storm Beneath Calm Waters)Hm, I really need to read Jyuunishi Enkei no Monogatari next.

This fic is so susspensful! I can't wait to see what happens next! Fortunately I don't have to! I'm going to go continue reading!

Hm, what IS Shi-chan up to? Oh well, I'll find out in the next chapter!

And Ina-chan definatly succeeded with Akito. Akito is even more crazy then before, but he's (in some ways) still the same.

This fic is so exciting, I can't wait to continue reading, wich means my review must end.

Mata ne, Ina-chan!

Ina-chan is mean! Getting Tohru and my hopes up like that! Okay, just kidding! But I seriously thought Yuki was back.

Preeclampsia! Oh poor Kagura-chan and Kyo-chan! I hope Kagura and the baby will be okay.

Anyway I'm still loving the fic! I can't wait until the end, but at the same time I know, when it's over I will miss reading it...

Buh bye Ina-chan!

Well fisrt off I've only read the first six volumes of Furuba so I don't know much about Rin. I read spoilers and character bios online all the time but not many poeple have much to say about Rin, or they just don't know much about her. Therefore I dont know much of anything about her, but so far if she is acuratlly depicted in this fic at all, (and she probably is) I don't like her one bit! This is definatly not a good first impression though, first she tries to kill Yuki, then bad mouths Tohru and then she's acting like a total brat to Shigure!

And what does she have against Tohru, Yuki, Kyo and all men in general?

Oh well, I guess I'll have to do more research on Rin! Also I'm still loving the story! Keep up the good work Ina-chan!

Ina-chan your fics always break my heart! Not really I guess, I love a good sad story as long as the it has a happy enough ending. I'd be so sad if Yuki died! I'm really hoping that Yuki dosen't die, not just for his sake but for Tohru and everyone else.

Also if he does die I don't knwo what would be worse, if Kyo's kid was cursed by the rat or is Tohru's kid was. I don't believe that Kyo could hate his kid even if the kid was cursed by the rat, but I think it would just kill him if his kid hated him.

And then you also have to consider how painful it would be if your child was possesed by the spirit of your dead husband.

Unless Yuki pulls through in the end I don't see any other way this story could end with out being un-believably sad!

I love this story so much! But...I'm extremely disappointed...you haven't updated in more than a year, even on other sites. You haven't given up on this fic, have you? *panics*

Hey I just figured that I take the moment to check out this story because while looking at other profiles I see that you are on a lot of favorite authors or favorite stories, and I can tell why. This story is absolutely wonderful and very descriptive, and even if it's the beginning, it already catches my attention just like the word "Kyo" ha ha. I envy you so much for having such talent in writing...*cries*. Well, I'm not sure if you have finish this story, so I suppose I can't say update. Sayonara for now!

DarkKyo