Myrcella and Robb are so very sweet together.

Another solid chapter. Keep up the good work.

I could try and give some criticism or I could dither on about how well written it is. Neither of those options ring true so I will just say this. This was an absolute joy to read and I feel myself itching to keep on reading.

Well done.

I like what you've done with Arryn. Though I didn't really think Jon Arryn would be friendly enough with Tywin to foster his heir, it is the best thing that could have happened to him.

Quentyn is in a mess that I don't really see resolving in his favor. Too many unknowns to account for. Dany might like the idea of fAegon rather than Martell.

An interesting AU story, very nicely crafted.

I love this version of Robert Aryn. He's a badass!

Hurrah for an update! I enjoyed the first version of this story and am loving this one too. Your writing is terrific as are your story ideas.

This flashback was kinda sudden, though I see why it might be important.

Omg, bruh. Amaze. I read the original AoT and I loved it and I'm so stoked to be reading your re-write. I'm interested in the changes that you've made and they almost read like two completely different stories. I do like that this one isn't as couple focussed as the OG AoT, but at the same time, that was one of my favourite things about the Original. Just great, great work. I hope you update again soon. I'm keen on some Rob/Cella action. Have a magical day and thank you so much for taking the time to write this. It's legit' such a pleasure to read. xxxx

I hope you will update soon. Enjoying this story all the more on my second read through.

Hey there! I absolutely love this story! I found the original online somewhere and I'm absolutely stoked for the re-write! I see you haven't updated for a while, but I really hope you'll pick it up again. I binge read the original over the weekend, and I'm so keen to see what changes you'll make. Definitely one of my favourite fics, and I'm hoping that one day, we'll have more Robb/Myrcella. Such an underrated dynamic!

Enjoyed this story the first time round, enjoying it now.

Ayy Lady lives this time. Niceee

...this is the first time in any fanfiction story I've read that I've really love a depiction of Renly. Love him here. Thanks for the chapter update

Well, now I want Robin Arryn to actually succeed for once, and put a spoke in Baelish's little games.