Was very good until the "Devil may cry" bull stink. It does NOT work in DXD or Narutos world. When you do a crossover MAKE sure the heaven, underworld and/or earth can be mixed without the minimum mess being made. This has a lot of potential but not with devil may cry in it. Good luck in the future.

those people are assholes don't let it get the better of you

those people are assholes don't let it get the better of you

Its unfortunate annoying/bad reviews made you drop this fic. It was fairly unique in many ways. Naruto from a very powerful point in canon, with all his powers and memories intact, and actually remaining badass, rather than as so often happens, becoming weak, no chakra, losing his memory or fighting like he's a 12-year-old fresh genin.

You even could've made Raynare work as you didn't show us that canon scene, so in your world, she could've escaped alive, fled earlier and one of the other Fallen was the killer of Asia.

I understand though how hard it is to write after losing your inspiration for what you're writing. But this was going well for the first 6 chapters.

Damn I really hope you’ll right this again. I really loved this story and would have kept in reading till complete

just... unrealistic as fuck... i mean, riser was up and coming in the rating games wasn't he?... offering up his queen before the match?... give him more credit than that... he's not that stupid... what does that do?... either motivates her to give her all to not get offered up or straight up throw the match to be free of him... or be indecisive as fuck which riser should know is bad for combat... and even then... i can't give you the benefit of the doubt here cause you put Yubelluna as part of the harem... portraying her as such a questionable character right of the bat is just...

you need more experience people...

WTF!EVERYTHING WAS ALL GOOD UNTIL FUCKING THIS HAPPENS FUCKINF ONLY 7 CHAPTERS SHITHEAD!

sad, i truly love this story, n would have continued reading it until it was complete, n I love reading you other Naruto crossover fanfics

Yo pain did someone finally adopt this? I spotted another story with its title a couple minutes ago, and did a broad range search on fanfiction where I found this(come to think of it I think I started to read this but was one of the nay sayers about the out of character stuff, and if I was one of them I wish to apologize), and another that was titled "My Hero Made Real Reboot". The Reboot is typed by Shadow-Mind-Games, while the other one, the one I first noticed is being typed by Shadow-Realm-Productions. SRP is the more recent listing.

not sure if it works the same way when you upload a story as it does when you sent a chapter to a beta reader but you don't need the files to be on your personal computer you can redownload them through the site it's just you'll have lost anything that you had written down in the way of notes for new chapters. Since I've started on this site and done a little beta work for others I'm on my 3rd computer an 4th hard drive an yet all the stuff that was sent to me to beta is still able to be downloaded through the docx

I think rather than Great Red it would've been better had you used someone from the old devil faction using one of the evil dragons to try an get the Rinnegan knowing it would help them with Trihexa since in the end Red helped Issei and everyone out with Rizevim an that group plus with Trihexa then again it might not have been known when you started this that Red was actually a good guy

I know you've quit writing this story but at the time did you not know that Bikou could also use Senjutsu?

I really fucking hate how so many idiots use a gender confused shape shifting dragon with zero emotions as a love interest for Naruto. Ophis has no real fucking gender Azazel has stated as much saying the last time he'd seen Ophis was as a man

I read thru the reviews and I think more people are flaming about the whole third eye thing most of the reviews hate that, so all you had to do is switch up it putting it in his eye then the flames would had KINDA stopped

Fuck. You.