Its well paced for a oneshot. Its a good soulmate story. Write on!

Wow, I haven't read many soulmate AUs, but this seems to make the most sense out of all of them. (Thank you!) It was really cute, and I like the way you managed to get Viktor's gruffness in without spelling out his accent or compromising his good-natured side.

Since this obviously isn't canon, I felt that a bit of the dialogue was forced, but you fixed that every time by countering an idealistic phrase with a blush or a doubt. And the ending was fantastic - "He'd come up with something later." I actually laughed, I don't know why... :p

-Myc

great story!

Brilliant!

süß - ist schön zu lesen. ich mag das pairing. lg hayne

Just amazing wish mpreg for soulmates only when same sex

At least they were together after the battle was over and now will have a chance to be happy.

sequel please more of this story please dont let it end here please

That story was just great. It took me anew. I normally wouldn't read something like this, but it was very good. The story flowed very nicely and had a great plot. Harry did seem much more feminine than he did in the books. Your story also made me take another look at Victor. Great work.

WOW!

Love it.

cool

I like your story!