oh my god that was good. Your writinging is amazing thanks for the smile :)

i loved it

It made sense...why did you think that it didn't? Then again, I'm an English major...

I'm kind of half awake now, but I liked that a lot.

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Thanks for entering the contest. Sounds good. There are some words I don't even know what they mean. I'll re-read it again a couple of times and we'll let ya know who wins. Thanks again for entering.

Wahh... I can actually imagine it happening! Hmm... Liked the way you portrayed the story! Hope you'll write more Sanzo x Goku fics in the future! _.

Very dark. Not too shabby however!

cute sappy love story...haaah! good bedtime story...yaoi air is breezing!

hie!

i really like your fic! im a sanzo/goku fan! hmm...let's see..well, ur fic was kinda confusing, though, i wasnt really sure who was talking at certain parts..but i think i get the picture...so anyways, gr8 job! :D

Woah! Some pretty long words you've got there! Really confusing at first but I got it!