Nice chapter. Nice idea. A nice fic in general. This review is actually for all 5 chapters...Firstly, I want to say that thank you for creating a BELIEVABLE Sharingan!Naruto. You wouldn't believe the number of trashy Dojutsu! Naruto I've encountered that either makes Naruto overpowered, unbelievably angsty, or some other bullshit like Minato Namikaze being related to Madara like WTF?!

Unlike those blemishes on Naruto fanfiction, this fic is well crafted, with a solid idea. It has great characterization all-round -from Hinata to Naruto, to most especially Sasuke. So may people mess him up. I like how Naruto got the eyes and the pseudo-memories and everything...I like how you do Itachi and Kakashi. I love everything...

I have some questions and ideas in mind, especially regarding the eyes...For example, would Naruto get a different Mangekyou ability? Naruto unlocked the Mangekyou on his own. He did not inherit them from Sasuke i.e Sasuke did not unlock the Mangekyou (unlike Kakashi whereby he only unlocked it because Obito saw Rin die). It makes sense; it'll also help enforce the idea that the eyes have been inserted inside his DNA. Anyways, magical eye powers. What Mangekyou ability would he have? I doubt it'll be Amaterasu and the ability to control said hellish flames since Sasuke's chakra is gone. I'm not sure what ability it could be. Shin Uchiha could create explosions by looking at stuff if I remember right (or was it telekinesis?). And Indra could also create black flames, though they were not Amaterasu. So yh. I'm thinking something that can be supplementary since Naruto might become OP. Either that or something that'll affect Naruto emotionally. I already have some ideas. Just note that they need to be named after the Shinto gods and that each eye does not need to have a separate ability, as seen with Shisui.

The first one is the ability to create chakric phantoms based on people we have interacted with once. I'm not sure if it should be their actual souls or how the user perceived the person. It'll be interesting for Naruto and he can either use it for defense and offence. It can also help with some character-building from past losses and a Naruto-Kakashi bonding

Another involves time manipulation, kinda like Kylo Ren. He can stop time for up to 30 seconds with the left eye and speed it up for up to the same amount of time. If he uses one ability, he has to use the other before it can be used again.

Another one is related to Ying and Yang Release and Naruto/Sasuke's high Yang/Yin chakra. SO basically, the left eye can make some basic illusions come to life (adding Yang to Yin), kinda like the Kurama clan's kekkai genkai. The right eye can add life to inanimate objects or chakra constructs (bringing Yin to Yang), like adding consciousness to an Earth or water dragon.

The next eye ability is the ability to absorb and reflect jutsu. Absorption for left, reflection for right. The user can only reflect the jutsu, kinda like Yagura's water mirror. They can't use it continuously. It's only one use. The user's chakra reserves are used, and the user cannot expel a jutsu after t's absorbed.

The last one will be able to see into the past with the left eye and see into the future with the right. I'm not sure about this one. I just really like Naruto seeing past scenes and learning from them, but not experiencing them firsthand. Kinda like he'll watch a memory. Not sure about the future one though. It can be kinda like that too, but the future cannot be predetermined so that one will show multiple possibilities...

Yh...sorry for that. I just really like the possibilities presented...I also wonder if the eye pattern will change. If not, will Sasuke's Sharingan give Naruto greater fluidity and movement as it did for Sasuke? Not sure. I'm also wondering about Sasuke (or rather Naruto)'s Susanoo. It'll obviously be orange now. I wonder how it'll change too. Also, I wonder what Naruto's special Rinnegan ability would be, like Madara's Limbo and Sasuke's swapping thing.

Next thing. I wonder how the rest of the Rookie 9 would be affected. I like the part about Shikamaru. It'll be fun if he learned fuuinjutsu too. He can create them with his shadow, meaning AoE seals, like a mass explosion seal and stuff. I also wonder what'll happen to Ino. I don't know why, but I feel as if she'll eventually confront Naruto and blame him. It's stupid and cliche, but I'm expecting something like that to happen at one point. Another idea, or maybe just a way to include him. He gives Naruto some shades or something. Aburama-grade and all that stuff.

Next thing...thank you for making Naruto not immediately OP. What most people who make Naruto use the Shadow clone training make it static and repetitive. Thnx for nor doing that. Also please remember that said training method makes Naruto dead tired since all his clone's exhaustion hits him.

I love what you've done with Hinata too, including her chakra affinity. Most people make it water whilst that's not canon. It's lightning (and fire if I recall) so thank you for that. I also like your characterization of her. I feel as if she'll be the Danzo to Naruto since she'll handle all the dark stuff he cannot. I also love the snake contract thing. I don't get why people always rage on Manda though. He hates Orochimaru. But he's a summons so he has to at least listen... Also, if Hinata ever becomes a sage, I wonder how that'll factor in. I mean the Hyuuga use no weapons, but the snakes' senjutsu ability allows one to control inaminate objects-at least I think so. Also Oro's mark...I thought Kabuto still had to put blood on it? I'll have to check on it.

Also, can I suggest a plan for Itachi? So his Susanoo (did I spell that right?!) can seal things forever. So since he's not dying by Sasuke's hand, maybe he can die sealing like 3-4 of the Akatsuki members or the Juubi's husk before burning his eyes so that they can never be recovered.

Another thing...Oro's reaction to Sasuke's death is really awesome but also kinda meh. I expected him to rage more before he plans revenge: the guy lost two host bodies in one night. Also, I don't think he'll be able to come into contact with Itachi easily since the Akatsuki is also after him. I also wonder whose body he'll use now. I'll say either Kabuto or Jugo. Or he might try to create his own body, kinda like how he created Mitsuki in Boruto. I've always wondered why he didn't do that. He can go grave robbing to collect DNA and tissue samples, and maybe some semen and eggs, before creating hos a perfect body which he can continuously alter to suit his needs.

Also...Itachi telling Naruto about the Akatsuki/...I wonder how that'll go. Tsunade is bound to find out about the dirty deeds done under Hiruzen's rule (even if they weren't by his command) and she and Jiraiya can help come up with ways to deal with them. (I also really like the idea of new medics performing surgery on Hidan to learn about orgasms. It might be a bit gruesome and cruel, but then he's immortal and he'd be having multiple orgasms from the pain so it'll be a win-win). It'll also help draw attention to Danzo too. Speaking of Danzo...I wonder if he'll try to kidnap Naruto, or at least get keep him prisoner to experiment on his chakra to help him adapt his eyes and arm. Maybe that can be a new thing for Oro too...that way, he'll be able to continuously use Sasuke's eyes and maybe even add kekkai genkai easily. Wait...will Naruto be able to get more kekkai genkai? That'll be too overpowered. I'm already wondering how he'll be when he integrates Sasuke's moves into his style (especially the shurikenjutsu and wire techniques - I love those).

Also...would the Akatsuki be striking earlier to prevent Naruto from unlocking a Rinnegan? That'll rush things forward...Or they can wait and steal Naruto's eyes...especially Obito in case the plan with Nagato falls through. It can be part of a plot involving Itachi imploding the Akatsuki and causing infighting.

That's all I have for now. If I have any more ideas I'll let you know.

PS: I know you're still active on based on your most recently published favorite fics. I'm not going to pressure you into updating. Just know that your fanbase is waiting. We're as large and loyal and as ever and we're waiting for your return. Hopefully, some of my ideas can help get rid of writer's block. Also, I don't mind 3000-word chapters...don't pressure yourself to write 7500 words. Remember, fanfics are for fun. They're not supposed to be a chore...

PSS: Isn't Tobi more serious? Meh.

Please continue with this story has so much potential, I'm loving it

Good job on the writing. Please continue writing the story, the premise is sad but also has so much potential

wow. I really enjoyed this. Great premise and characterization. Quite well written. I hope you feel inspired to continue it.

sad this had potential too bad it's naruhina oh well...

Im calling you out on that Promise you made though!
You talked about 200K Words at least and here we are:
Yes i know Boruto isn‘t all that and might make you lose Interest, but i just cope with it by telling myself that it isn‘t Canon. So should you and after that get your Ass back up and continue on with this great Story!
*sniffs* it deserves it!

This is shaping up to be a Great Story and im really curious about how you will develop some Strings (i.e. how does Naruto learn the Mangekyo Abilities, does he still go blind? What happens to Itachi now? Nevermind Orochimaru or will Naruto learn about his Parents((Uzumaki Heritage and being the 4.s Son)) and how op is it that you already introduced Bunshin learning)
Him with the Hirashin and Mangekyo.. i actually crave OP Naruto so im in for the Ride!

Omg great fanfic. I stan. Pls update!

Did Black Zetsu know about Naruto and Sasuke being reincarnations in canon?

Dear Author-teme:

You *better* make my eating ramen a theme. I know where you live and Kakashi will learn Samui in time. Do the math!

Yours (as long as you feed me ramen),
Uzumaki Naruto

Hinata ruins this.

Saske is one character that should have died in the exams to make that whole world a better place.

...If Naruto had two, always on Sharingan, the chakra exhaustion would kill even him. Unless he's gonna walk around blindfolded 24/7

I hope this story isn’t dead, it’s really good! But inactive for 3 years, oh well.

Oh my! What’s happening to Naruto? Why’s he getting Sasuke’s memories?!