i love this and watt pad version , best of the best

I don't think you understand how much I love this story. Like, it makes me so happy :3

I'm happy that things got figured out and it's nice seeing them get along... mostly on Ieyuji's part of course lol. I find it hilarious that they were only sent for the Vongola Rings XD

This story never fails to amaze me! I'm super happy that Tsuna is back to normal! Also, I kept thinking that the "him" that they referred to was Reborn, but then I wasn't sure and I'm really curious!

I was hoping to read Mochida's beatdown, but I'm okie with the result. Imagining it made it prettier *smirks*

After reading so many fics, Mukuro has grown to be one of my top favorite guardians I love him in the anime too, but the fanfics give a whole different kinda love XD Chrome is lovely too! Favorite girl without a doubt! I also look forward to Kyoya torturing Mochida next chapter :3

I like how you reel back Tsuna and the guardians' powers. Obviously, being framed a parallel world and whatnot, they can easily win, but you're trying to even it out and taking into account, in the case of this match, the fact that Tsuna would never want I-Pin to be hurt. That's just what I think though haha

I almost thought you were gonna make Lambo win, but I think I'm glad with the way things turned out. Love this story more and more!

I'm so excited! Also, glad Fon showed up cuz I love him XD

I know you wrote this so we can try to understand Ieyuji. But honestly! I can't understand him at all! Being angry when your older brother doesn't get mad at you for acting like a jackass. I really don't like him.

Now with the explanation, I'm understanding even more! I'm really curious as to why Tsuna came back so different though :/ I'm really enjoying this!

I love this! The idea is amazing and I'm assuming in a parallel world like Mukuro mentioned in the beginning, the flow of the anime was there? But in this one, it changes, and Tsuna and Hayato have the memories from it?

eh, if nono had seald his flames, i can completly understand why he's soulless

I’m sorry, but I just can’t read this anymore.
The amount of grammatical errors seems to increase the further I read and I didn’t want to translate it to something readable in my head anymore.
I know that you said you got a beta, but that beta does not seem to help at all.
This had an interesting premise and I would’ve loved to continue reading but I could barely force myself to the sixth chapter let alone the whole story.
I would advise getting a better beta or working on your grammar.
I don’t want to sound mean or overly critical but that’s how I feel and I tried to say it as nicely as possible. I wish you luck in future stories.

Thank God that Tsuna and everyone is safe.