This story us really interesting I can't wait to see what happens next and if Allen will tell them what happened in his world. I wonder whats going on. Maybe the universes are merging...?
Anyway great chapter

Brillant. I should i seen it coming but nonetheless it was a great plot twist. :D Thanks for posting a complete story. It was tragic, hilarious, and worth every minute. I suppose it did never explain why Allen disappeared in their world and the deal with the lake. That's still a mystery.

Your writing is beautiful! Although the plot's abit confusing to me.

OH. MY. GOD. *faints*

Okay, until the end, I was laughing. First Allen's kidnapped by Road to get Neah to talk to her (the other end of the deal being help with Lenalee, but I doubt that still stands), and then he participates in a snowball fight, himself and Wisely against Jasdevi.
But then his traits of himself are disappearing one by one...

XD Cross. Of COURSE. The man known as the devil himself... But I'm surprised he's running a bar instead of freeloading off of a woman who runs one.
And then the heartwarming scene with Allen resolving the fight between the brothers, d'awww. :3
But that dream sequence... O.o

So Allen and Neah fence, Mana cooks, and Neah asks Allen for help with his melody that will later be taught to Allen. Well, it's an alternate universe, so...
And oh. Oh my. Mana's figuring it out. But at least that eliminates the this-is-a-dream possibility, right? Wait- Suman?! But the best quote of the chapter: "And that is why I am the older, smarter, better-looking brother." XD Burn, Neah...
And then there's Lavi and Miranda. *shakes head* I can't wait for Kanda and Lenalee...

Love it! XD That's really all I can say. Well, okay, I can say more... For one thing, it figures Cross dated the teacher once AND he's being called Allen's father. For another, the banter between the Allen, Mana, and Neah when Allen was sort of settled in was absolutely wonderful. XD And we can't forget Road and Neah's sort-of-dating status... XD
Last but not least, TIM!

Wow, good theory.

Loved the story. Ended on a cliffhanger which all I can say is "Thats bullsh!t right there m0thafucka..." But dude... It was good. Leads into a lot really. Cool story bro.

*kind of cries at the end* I love stories that are like thissss! Allen is conflicted, then there was road! I love how the story came this far :)

Ahhh! Brilliant! OMG that last bit, like ahh! Amazing!

Well, as with most of your works on this series, I really enjoyed this, and I'm a little saddened to see another one go, but it was well worth the read. Your writing is still one of the best I've found on this site(or literally anywhere), so please keep up the good work!

Well, as with most of your works on this series, I really enjoyed this, and I'm a little saddened to see another one go, but it was well worth the read. Your writing is still one of the best I've found on this site(or literally anywhere), so please keep up the good work!

Well, that was bittersweet. Time travel always messes me up if I think about it for too long, and thanks for finishing this. I really enjoyed it.