Im so happy you decided to write a sequeal! I love the sentimental value of the pipe and giving it more scene time was GREAT

Great ending! I liked it.

HI IT'S CIVILLAIN YOU PROBABLY DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO I AM SO SORRY BUT I SAW THIS A WHILE AGO AND I JUST NOW REALIZED THAT IT'S YOU WHO WROTE IT ))
it's a really great concept, and you wrote it so well! this is precious, honestly :-)

This tugged my heart so much! Lovely fic, hon!

Again, i love it! I hope you'll write a continuation though... Great work!

Always wanted a fic with Luffy and a pipe

Whoa,,I love your story. We alk knew that Luffy has experience fighting with a pipe previously, but no peeps of using it now. Thanks for writing this story. I love to see how the crew are shocked that Luffy actually know how to fight with weapon.

Loving the title 3 this is a nice story, I never thought I'd see something about Luffy's use of a pipe!

I rly love luffy and pipe stories. luffy with a pipe. luffy fighting with said pipe. luffy secretly being rly good at it, and then luffy keeping his same pipe? being supr protective of it? oh boy oh boy this was so rad i'm all ! good shit good shit

:DD
It's quite a bit OOC, but I feel Luffy *would* do those things (Italics :P)

Thank you very much for writing! It came as a surprise that Luffy would use it in this story, but that was also kinda expected XD And that last sentence xD Everyone's flinching when Luffy's taking the staff makes me laugh

I'm also kinda disappointed you didn't show Luffy and Sabo's fight (Bam Bam :D) but I don't really mind if there was a fight description or not. Leaving it up to my imagination :D

Thanks for writing once again! (Also, happy new year :3)

update soon please

Awwww! I love fics where the pipes get special mention~ it was really good, though there were a few grammar slips, but as this is your first fic I'm gonna suspect that you've improved! Great work!

lol love this! how you balanced luffy's anger toward the crew, vs his unwillingness to scare them too much.

This is such a cool little fic I love it! I never thought too much about what Luffy did with his pipe, or of he even had one pipe that was special or went through a bunch of them as a kid. I like the attachment Luffy has to his pipe and of course his reason is because it reminds him of the time he shared with his brothers. Great job!

I wish luffy would use his mystery pipe more often *sigh * but I guess his more to hand to hand combat. good story by the way it's just has quite a lot of grammar mistake but not that I'm complaining I'm not much of a writer myself.