Reviews for Her First Moonrise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the extra details, it's so cute. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
![]() ![]() Nnnnaaawwww I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG its so well written, I cannot wait for your next stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You still reign supreme with your one shots :) The emotions, character motivations, and dialogue is always so on point! :) Great stuff! |
![]() ![]() Nicely written. Still impressed with how well you capture the characters voices. :) Hope you write another one or two shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please! :D I love this as much as ur other story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep writing this amazing story! It's definitely the best fanfic about Maddy and Rhydian I've read so far! Can't wait to read more! It's super accurate and your grammar is excellent, which is rare on this website hahah An Italian fan ;) |
![]() ![]() I love the inclusion of Maddy's parents, always make me laugh. It makes sense that Rhydian would still be slightly awkward with them at this point in the show (1x05) since he was still adjusting to knowing other wolfbloods. This was delightful to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I had the most fun in weeks reading this little story. Wonderful job! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() please please please update |
![]() ![]() Love it, you should make this an actually maddian story |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I was trying to decide which half of this two shot is my favourite, but I'm pretty sure it's impossible to choose because they're both so good. I enjoyed this chapter so much, and I loved the humourous side to it. I know I've said it before, but you write from Rhydian's POV so well, and it's not an easy thing to do, but you just do it really effortlessly and seamlessly! Can't wait to see what you write next :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story. It's becoming quite rare to read stories this great, and eight-thousand words is a great length or any one or two-shot. Hope there's more of these in the future. |
![]() ![]() ahhh, you finished this fic :) idk why, but you are just so good at writing from rhydian's pov. the humor, the awkwardness, and his affection toward maddy, it's all just very well done. I'm super excited to see what your new idea is! |