Yay, this was so beautiful! It was a nice complete one-shotthe pacing was just right and everything came together splendidly. Nicely done!

cute

Beautiful! A complete one shot and the characters are true to themselves. I love it when Mai is not just an angry, spunky caricature who likes to pick fights with Naru just because she can, but is actually a strong person like she is in the manga/anime.

I am so in love with this one shot. t. It covered amazing points! Naru was in character and so was Mai. I love it.
Have I told u that I love it? Because I do, I do. This story flowed so smoothly. YES.

whoa... that was... this was... they were... the author... its just so... waaaahhhhhh GREAT

Gorgeous!

Best one shot ever

Ah! I love it! It was great and so well written too! Thank you!

That was so heartfelt. Your writing is beautiful, and I can tell it comes from the heart. Wonderful story :)

This is lovely. I really like the observations from Lin as well as the way you illustrated Ayako's perception about Mai's nature and empathy. It's nice to see Naru finally be honest with himself, to have an honest conversation with Mai and actually listen for once. :)

This was one of the most amazing reads I've had in such a long while. SO beautiful! Your character development was astounding. I loved the way that everyone just didn't yell at Naru for that time on the lake. The way you brought Monks charter to a higher point than just getting mad makes me have so much more faith in this fandom. Keep up the good work, and u can count on me as a supporter ;p

So happy to see Naru finally got it, even if it was Monk who had to tell him. :)

This is adorable and I love it! I love the writing style and the tone of the piece and everything!

This was really wonderful!

Soooooo sweet. You captured them perfectly!