I really love this story and the concepts that you introduced, especially with the 'sort of' insinuation that Harry is the master of death with the fact that she doesn't age, or the descriptions for her eyes.
P.S. I read a little bit of your profile to see if you were still alive and I understand your plight. Just know that whenever you have time to update and complete this story, you'll at least have one confirmed reader awaiting for it haha :D

Nice fanfic.

I found three potential grammar errors in chapter 2:
"while she avoiding saying just" - "while she was avoiding saying just" or "while she avoided saying just"
"very depths of his souls" - "very depths of his soul"
" lack of fight when" - " lack of a fight when"

Thanks for writing and have a nice day.

This is one of the most interesting takes on Tom's early life that I ever read. Very intriguing! I loved what you did with it!
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WAooooooooooooooooooo that's taking cradle-robbing to the next level. Very creepy, I like it

Hmm, I wonder what is the best influence or first impression or the thing that make you like your partner. Intelligence, Appearance, Mannerism, Unique Eccentricity, Stupid or Naive, Athletic, Serious, Know-it-alls, Bookworms, Nerds, Psychotic or something idk etc. etc. etc.
I wonder since many couples divorce, people are more ambitious and career-centric, they tend to not think about marriage. Did they not just find their matches? On the other hand, those who succeeds I noticed, balance. Those couples are similars with a sprinkle of opposite. Or if the other is destructive, the other is both calm and destructive (I know it's a conundrum. I think it's rare. Good luck finding yours if you're personality is too complex. I tend to like these types of couples though, they're so amusing, and just fun).

But I think what we're doing is right. Most people today don't think about marriage, rather, their careers. And what they love doing. I think it's better to wait than rush. Even if you don't find yours, you can at least adopt or stay and help your parents. Family. There's too many humans in the world anyways, we'll run out of food in no time xD

the way tom sr. said breeding makes me snort. For a moment there I thought he was Draco

how vain that tom sr. is xD I always prefer power and hard work though (I hate laziness), so I guess it's kinda the same.

interesting :) are you planning other pov's?

I'm not really great at writing reviews, but if I had to say, I do love the pace of the story, in my opinion, it isn't too fast, but not too slow. The details and characters are very nice, Merope seems to be the kind of person to be honest, but wants to be accepted, Riddle Sr says that he would always love her, but how would he react to her true identity...? Anyways, the relationships are very nice and interesting, so I do look forward to the continuation of this.

I suppose appealing for an update is in vain given it's been nearly two years, but I shall do so anyway. Please, please give us chapter three!

I could think of this chapter as the ending but...I sooo wish you'd continue. This is one of those rare works that I'd not hesitate putting on shelf. A very well crafted gem indeed! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

I enjoyed your story.

Please write a chapter with Tom Riddle's point of view story is good so far

I love how this chapter was written from TR Sr.'s POV. It made for an interesting read, but I'll admit, I skipped through parts to get to the parts I liked (Harry and Tom kissing, for example) because I'd already read this story.. And guess what? The story actually stayed with me.

So kudos on having written such a good story.

I read this a long time back on Ao3, and left a kudos there. I'm so glad I found this fic here again, because now, I can add it to my favourites. You write remarkably well.