| Reviews for Unbreakable |
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Yin-Yang Yoh chapter 5 . 3/16/2018 You're doing good Mango, keep up the good work, and whenever you feel well enough to come back to this, you'll do fine. |
TaciturnReader chapter 5 . 7/31/2016 Really glad to see this isn't dead. RobinxSully definitely needs more love. Enjoyed the story so far can't wait to see more. |
Xoraan chapter 4 . 8/14/2015 Man, there needs to be more of these. Sully was the love interest of my first playthrough and I've married her again and again in several others. There isn't enough Sully and Kjelle love out there. I'm especially liking Kjelle in this, it expands upon her forceful and competitive nature while at the same time introduces who she acts in a family dynamic. Need to see more of these. I'm glad you're not just brushing aside all the other children from the future and are actually giving them a fair amount of limelight. Can't wait to see the rest. I'm also itching for a Lucina and Kjelle fight, between the two daughters of the strongest in the Shepards. Lucina being the prodigal daughter of the exalted hero and Kjelle the daughter of the toughest woman and the strategist in Ylisse. Robin and Chrom can make bets and comment on their daughters :D |
SchismeEternel chapter 4 . 7/18/2015 Really like your story so far! I've been having trouble finding fanfics about this particular pairing. |
Anon of Anons chapter 4 . 7/18/2015 It is I! The Anon of Anons! This story is awesome. I like that it has Sully/M!Robin as the pairing, as I like it as well. Keep up the good work! |
patattack chapter 4 . 7/18/2015 Cool fight. And the moment between Brady, Maribelle and Stahl at the end was funny. |
NikuKnight chapter 3 . 6/22/2015 Oh gods, this is both fantastic and terrible. Poor Kjelle! Oh my gosh haha. I wanted to marry Sully, but to my dismay I chose to play as a girl for my first playthrough. Curses! She ended up marrying Gaius. Pffft this chapter is glorious though. I love it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
patattack chapter 3 . 6/13/2015 Haha, funny. That actually reminds me of an idea for one of my stories, where the main character (18 year old guy) is in bed with his girlfriend, and his 8 year old sister walks in on them, and he tries telling her that they're just wrestling. Keep it up. |
Solid Sun chapter 3 . 6/13/2015 kjelle screaming internally reminds me of Dragon Ball Abridged when Bulma started hitting on Future Trunks. His reaction was to scream internally, and loudly. It's one of my favorite moments with Future Trunks. Anyway, it was a good chapter, there are a few times you forget the r in her in the chapter, but it's easily fixed, so no worries. |
Zash101 chapter 2 . 5/24/2015 Yeah! *Fist bump* |
Zash101 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 YAY! A story where Sully is the main love interest |
zekrom84 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 Really nice chapter! I agree that Kjelle doesn't get enough love. My current playthrough has my avatar married to Sully, so this story is perfect :) |
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 Nice Kjelle fic! |