You updat too fast! I can't handle it! xD You're gonna be the reason I fail my tests x) Just kidding, I love your updates!

I love the relationship between Leo, Raph and Donnie. They are so different and yet they get along so well! And I love how they protected Donnie like that from those bullies, Stupid Casey jones! I used to like you buddy, but now you're just a jerk!
And It's so sad seeing Donnie getting bullied. He doesn't deserve that at all, I hate they always pick on younger and weaker ones, luckily we don't havy anything like that here in the Netherlands, at least not this severe. Though with every time they bring up that foster home I keep asking myself, what happened to them when they were younger? LIke how did they get seperated.

And Mikey is introduced yayness! Loved how Splinter almost hit him with his car xD But it was Mikey's fault after all, luckily he didn't actually got hit. Now onto the next chapter :P

See ya!

I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Please update soon! I love your story! I like the development, and i absolutely love MIKEY! Good work, keep it up!

This chapter was uh-ma-zing!

Too. Much. Feels!

Leo and Raph saw Donnie. They know him from the foster home they used to stay. Also Donnie knows Ninjutsu and his favorite weapon is the Bō. He was puzzled to know that Raph brought his sai to school. He could be suspended if they discover them.

Mikey showed up and with his easygoing personality, he would be happy to become friends with Leo, Raph and Donnie. He also knows how to manage the nunchaku.

This is great. I can't wait to see the four kids together.

Update soon.

Great story! And I love your version. master Splinter adopted Leo.

Years later, Leo met Raph, who according to Master Splinter resembles Leo a lot. Raph also knows martial arts, so he would practicing with Leo for now on.

You update this before I can even review this! Not like I'm complaining xD I love reading your stories. They flow so nicely! The story is interesting and I was immediately excited for it.
Though the beginning was a tiny bit rushed,, like the events, but at the same time it wasn't bothering me at all. It still flowed nicely, and I loved the skip between time to show all those aspects of his life. Like getting a job, teaching Leo, adopting him and Leo eventually going to school and meeting Raph. And figures Raph was getting in trouble already xD Because I could actually really see him doing so, and Leo jumping in to play the hero, or rather protecting Raph was really good too!
Though i wonder what Raph actually did back there, or I just read too fast again because I wanted to know if Raph was gonna be okay :P

And I can't be the only one who was expecting a 'space heroes is stupid' comment of some sorts. And I was right :D I laughed as well with that part.
Though I wonder what'll happen next chapter, with Don and Mikey still needing to be introduced (And no I totally haven't read chapter two already... nope.. not at all... )

See ya!

Now all four are here and I have feeling the next chapter will be the beginning of their new life and new discovery about themselves on each other.

genial, me gustó mucho espero con ansias los proximos capitulos y cuando conozcan a dony y mikey.

gracias por escribir

Wow a very good start! The beginning felt a little rushed but I guess that had to be done to explain large periods of time effectivly without turning it into something boring. After that you had a nice pace and a pretty good distribution of dialogue and descriptions.

What I only noticed now, when the cabdriver mentioned the new beginnings for Spliner, is that it really seems he is one of those typical American-dream-seekers which I somehow really like. Thanks for that new perspective.
I also like how you introduce the characters one at the time, although we haven't really had one with April in her first appearance ;)
What I think you should really keep doing is keeping the simmilairities between the boys simple, it's nice how those, except for of course the adoption, were very subtle between Raph and Leo. Maybe you could even have one of the brothers not knowing he is adopted for some extra confusion and suspense. Not that I want to tell you what to do, it's just a suggestion really. Man I really love the concept so far and I'm now all excited like for what you're gonna do with it ;)

See ya with the next chap!

I like this so far. It's pretty cute.

I'm interested in this story, can't wait for more.