| Reviews for Birth of Serpents |
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   RedWildFury chapter 12 . 8/29 Please update this! I love it and can't stop reading it! Also I love how snuggly Raphael is being toward Casey, its cute to me and puts a good twist on Raph who never shows much affection. Love the story and I hope it gets updated soon! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/24/2019 Noooooooo! How could you abandon this! I’m so mad! Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh! |
| tmntlover2013 chapter 12 . 9/3/2018 Great job on the story so far please update as soon as you can thanks. |
| Juanita27 chapter 12 . 4/30/2018 So good! More? |
| Crazy Craving chapter 12 . 2/22/2018 This story is so, SO much fun to read. And what a killer cliffhanger, too! Your portrayals of Splinter and Shredder in this chapter were just spot on. I could see Splinter carefully choosing his words as to provoke the Shredder into losing himself to his own rage, giving Splinter the upper hand. I've tried writing that kind of interaction before, but mostly it comes off like I don't understand a proper argument (which isn't true - you should hear some of the doozies I've gotten into over the years, lol). But you captured it masterfully, and it made the scene entirely believable. I didn't write this review with the intent of pressuring you into finishing and just stressing you out in the process. I just wanted you to know there are still people out there who are patiently waiting for the next chapters :) See you soon, hopefully! |
| Miko Eiko chapter 2 . 11/27/2017 para que haya paz siempre habrá una guerra, siempre |
| OjosDeGato chapter 12 . 6/2/2017 I'm screaming holy shit, yes |
| sleepless chapter 12 . 5/17/2017 I really want this story have a happy end |
| JoinTheWeb chapter 12 . 5/13/2017 Continue! ... Please? This is just SO good! |
| ThisVioletofMine chapter 12 . 4/27/2017 Epic! Awesome chapter! (Btw, a little fun fact, a recent survey shows that Americans are most likely to help a stranger. We kind of have a hero complex, lol!) Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| SlenderGrl chapter 12 . 3/14/2017 Omgooddd this is awesome! Ooh the last chapter! Such a dramatic cliffhanger! I hope you do update, I'm dying to know for this ends! |
| SewerSurfin chapter 12 . 2/10/2017 Intense. |
| FirebirdScratche chapter 12 . 2/7/2017 OMG! It's been a while, super happy to have an update! Great job! Very intense and exciting, I loved the flashback at the beginning. OMG poor Donnie though! He's so injured! i love Casey and April, you captured their voices very well. YAAAAY great job! |
| BubblyShell22 chapter 12 . 2/6/2017 Awesome chapter. I love how this plan is working and how Splinter is baiting Saki knowing what will happen if he does. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| BubblyShell22 chapter 11 . 2/6/2017 Awesome chapter. Yeah, things are really heating up now. I just hope the guys can get out of this mess soon. Nicely done on this. The Bubbly One, Shell |
