| Reviews for The Tomboy's Curse |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/25 wow! this was way bigger than it had any right, for a pan and trunks lemon fic i mean. girlfriend/boyfriend? can't see goku, gohan and videl taking that well. |
Derrick99 chapter 1 . 4/7 Great story but I didn't understand how old Pan is. |
the blue eyed avenging angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 write a sequel please this was amazing |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016 MAN O MAN..! That was hilarious and steamy as hell, brah..! I cannot believe I had missed this story coz it was in the DB GT section! Plz O plz put it under DBZ section... I don't want people to miss this awesomeness like I almost had...! You write some awesome stuff man! Cya! |
Aiyana-J. Snowbear chapter 1 . 12/20/2015 Real hardcore TP lemon. It was amusing. It deserves a favourite. Ai-chan. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 U should make a sequel great story |
CelesteWint3r chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 Oh woah man that was brutaly hawt! I always wondered what would have happend if Trunks went down her shirt to retrieve the keys, now I know xD haha lol that was an awesome long oneshot. I hope you will keep writting more stories like this one. :D |
PhantomDark chapter 1 . 9/12/2015 Not many canon Pan/Trunks scene around. I definitely know a regular Pan/Trunks would be fun to read as well, the interactions between Goku's tomboy granddaughter and Vegeta's son would be fun. I felt the first half where clothes came off was just rushed but well done on the sex scenes hope to see another story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 this was so good. i'm reading it a second time. |
Jasmine chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 Omg! Nosebleed! Hot damn! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 I like it. ** |
KITTY-SPRINKLES-96 chapter 1 . 6/1/2015 That was one of the best smuts I've read so far. Love your writing style. It's so easy to read and understand. |
BarbieGirl82 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015 Eeeew trunks had a nose bleed! great story. |
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 Oh Pan you're a dirty girl and Trunks is just the man to clean you up. Omg I wonder Goku would've done if he had seen Pan naked? Awesome story. :) |
Future Gohan's Apprentice chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 Man, that was an immense read. The lemon was great as usual. I'm not really into GT stuff, but if I had to read something I'm glad it was this. |