Reviews for The Tomboy's Curse
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25
wow! this was way bigger than it had any right, for a pan and trunks lemon fic i mean. girlfriend/boyfriend? can't see goku, gohan and videl taking that well.
Derrick99 chapter 1 . 4/7
Great story but I didn't understand how old Pan is.
the blue eyed avenging angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2019
write a sequel please this was amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
MAN O MAN..! That was hilarious and steamy as hell, brah..!
I cannot believe I had missed this story coz it was in the DB GT section! Plz O plz put it under DBZ section... I don't want people to miss this awesomeness like I almost had...!
You write some awesome stuff man! Cya!
Aiyana-J. Snowbear chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Real hardcore TP lemon. It was amusing. It deserves a favourite.

Ai-chan.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
U should make a sequel great story
CelesteWint3r chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Oh woah man that was brutaly hawt! I always wondered what would have happend if Trunks went down her shirt to retrieve the keys, now I know xD haha lol that was an awesome long oneshot. I hope you will keep writting more stories like this one. :D
PhantomDark chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Not many canon Pan/Trunks scene around. I definitely know a regular Pan/Trunks would be fun to read as well, the interactions between Goku's tomboy granddaughter and Vegeta's son would be fun. I felt the first half where clothes came off was just rushed but well done on the sex scenes hope to see another story.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
this was so good. i'm reading it a second time.
Jasmine chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Omg! Nosebleed! Hot damn!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
I like it. **
KITTY-SPRINKLES-96 chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
That was one of the best smuts I've read so far. Love your writing style. It's so easy to read and understand.
BarbieGirl82 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
Eeeew trunks had a nose bleed! great story.
LVR4Trunks-n-Vegeta chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Oh Pan you're a dirty girl and Trunks is just the man to clean you up. Omg I wonder Goku would've done if he had seen Pan naked? Awesome story. :)
Future Gohan's Apprentice chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Man, that was an immense read. The lemon was great as usual. I'm not really into GT stuff, but if I had to read something I'm glad it was this.
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