Reviews for Third Time's the Charm
D.Nia chapter 10 . 6/2
Hahahah I love this. I hope you're not leaving this unfinished, it has a lot of potential. If you won't finish it I would like to try to help you writing the chapters if you're interested, or give you ideas of how the characters would answer on my perspective. Hell, I would even try to take it under my wing even when I did not want to because I'm not a native English speaker and I don't know if I have the ability to make the characters to stay cannon.

I appreciate all the effort you've put into this fic. If you don't want to update because of what people could think (the time that has passed since you've done so) don't worry. People would be happy to see another chapter.

I love the idea of luffy loosing at marineford and being found by sabo. At least he has passed some good time with him. And I really like you've decided to put sabolu on this. I don't know if I would make it romantical but hell, I would love to read it. I encourage you to do so if you want to.

Love ~~
Bookgal7 chapter 10 . 5/3
Aw man! Another good timetravel fic ended before even getting to the grandline! :C
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 6/8/2019
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
Skyla579 chapter 10 . 3/9/2019
I’d love to see how it’ll go on! Sad to acknowledge though that the last update was in 2015...
Yuuki Heartfilia-Dragneel chapter 10 . 12/22/2018
Oh wow love the story very interesting and something different hope to read more soon!
kurosakiami01 chapter 10 . 7/27/2018
I really like this! My heart hurts for Luffy, especially the Luffy in the flashback. I mean, he lost so much...

Thank you so much for sharing!
Marked moon chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
This is honestly, one of the best time travel fanfictions I have ever read. It's unique and at least to me reflects Luffy's state of mind after Ace's death which I guess is what he'd be in right now. You aren't afraid to change interactions, using the characters instead of the sorroundings to carry the story which I really like. The story has a nice pace, and the only fault I can find is that it's probably a dead fic.
Faezier chapter 9 . 2/11/2018
Please continue the story if you can
alphaprs987 chapter 1 . 1/17/2018
Great story needs updating and I think the personality for the 36 year old luffy (if I added the ages right) is quite accurate to what it would be with so much hardship in his live(s)
It would be great if there was more but only update if you like what your adding and don't feel pressured into updating.
Lord Geovanni chapter 10 . 12/14/2017
I do understand the difficulties of continuing to write fanfiction. But I also do understand the ease by which life can move on without you noticing. Are you aware that it is been over two years since you last updated this? I just found this earlier today and quickly read through the entire thing. I absolutely love time travel stories and I really did feel strong emotions aligned with Luffy through his struggles. I do wonder if you have the ability to continue this story. Well I am quite eager to see more chapters, such a large gap in time since your last update I would assume the story is dead.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/25/2017
This is the best thing I've ever seen with my own two eyes
Faery66 chapter 10 . 9/12/2017
Hope to read more soon.

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io-kun chapter 10 . 8/23/2017
Hey, you have very interesting story! I like how you portray Luffy in his third life. He's still our cheerful protagonist despite all the things that happened to him in his first and second life. Definitely looking forward to see what happens next!
Lerya-chan chapter 10 . 4/17/2017
Please tell me you plan on finishing this?
Because it's really interesting, a new view on a time travel story and I'd like to see where it ends :D
The Whimsical Ermine chapter 10 . 3/15/2017
This is good
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