Really well done 10/10 one of the best fanfics I’ve read in a while you should be really proud

Just finished chapter 16. I have really had such a motion was reading anything in my whole life. Thank you for writing an absolutely beautiful wedding. It was perfect. I really wish this was Cannon. A man being woken up by fireworks after making love what a way to end that chapter. You are truly gifted! Thank you thank you!

Honestly the best fic for this fandom I've ever read.
So well written, such a great plot line!

I love the direction you are taking the story, even though it's different from the manga this really makes a lot of sense

Awesome!

so intelligently written

love

Ugh, beautiful. I had tears in my eyes when she gave it away, so impactful

Excellent as always

so good!

Everyone is so in character! Im so excited to read this while I'm waiting for the manga to be updated! It feels like canon!

so well written!

How I wish this is canon. I admire the way you weave the plot, my emotions were in turmoil at every chapter, uncertain of the paths that were shone by the bits and pieces of hints and everything came to a head so satisfyingly. Yona moving on from longing for Soo-won by giving her the pin to the Shin refugee child. The fleeting remark about her being Empress giving a small "happy ending" for the Sei-Shin-Kai. Her own dragon markings revealing that she was the one who was "trapped" all along. Quelling lingering distaste over how the council is always upsetting things unnecessarily by Yona casually calling them out as childish with Zeno. Ugh, there's just so many to list. I can't believe how much I love this. I'm supposed to be writing 6k research paper by tomorrow but I spent 8 out of 48 hour given to me reading this. Time to make this story stop being an instrument if procrastination and instead one of motivation!

I really like this story. I feel like the first 4-5 chapters are the strongest. Everyone is in character and the writing is great. I lost a little interest in some of the action scenes. I wish they had been a little more drawn out and descriptive. (I live for inner monologue and angst mostly.) Overall a really good fic though, and super long which is rare!

Aaahhhhhhhh! This is amazing! Amazing! The story and characters are very in line with what would actually happen in the manga, it's perfect! I was worried about sexual content since this is rated M, but the writing ended up censoring it in a very classy way. I enjoyed this, and I hope to enjoy it again, because I'm totally gonna reread this.