This was amazing, one of the best Amelia stories I've read to date!.

This was great. This was really well written and you really get Amelia's character. Nice work! :)

This is absolutely fantastic! I love Treasure Planet, and reading this story made me feel really connected to Amelia and her past. She is one of my most beloved characters. It was very creative and great job!

so sad! awsome thinking. u rule!

This is really great. To imagine the beginning of the movie, and to have such an exciting preamble for Treasure Planet takes real imagination and genius. Very well done; we never tire of reading this. Thank you! Rebecca and mom

that was great, you really bring out the emotions.

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i like it its very emotional!

oh, that is so cute! It's really awesome, good job! Amelia power! ;)

what can i say? is a wonderful story, every part of the dialogue is perfectly written, and the part when Victoria tells Amelia those words to cheer up her, touched my heart, hey, if you ever write another, be sure to send it to me.

Oh my lord that is good. This is amazing! This story is wonderful!

You know Havana? I went to her Sketchbook site, and wow can she draw! You think you can convince her to do some Treasure Planet Artwork? She can draw Victoria!

I just wanted to say that I enjoyed your story. You did an excellent job on Amelia and Arrow's characterizations. Perhaps you might continue your story, telling more about the Treasure Planet voyage from Amelia's point of view (we got to see so little in the film about what else was going on, on board the ship).

Great story, very touching. I LOVE Amelia! Hope you write more about her.

That was great. Well written, i liked how you made it about Amelia's past and her sister.

And YOU...were on writer's block when you wrote this? ...Lauren, this is awesome! I can tell you really find the voice of Captain Amelia on this. (And trust me, she's as complexed as they get!) Man, you are going to make one hellova writer one of these days. Too bad we couldn't partner up and see what we could whip up together! xD Writing Partners!...Yeah! If you're interested, e-mail me! xD

But seriously...never give up. This story was very powerful. And that's rare to find. Especially in a fanfic.

Wow! What a great story! I love reading work that gets into the characters' heads. Well done.