I really enjoy this! Very interesting and I love the impact one person can make!

Writing a cliffhanger how terrible!

And here I thoughthink that it is common sense when writing fiction.

Your way of saving him seemed a bit out of no where. (possibly just me thinking that) I mean I have seen heaps of ways for him to get saved.
Him not being completely dead and using Dr Cho's tech to fix him up, Ginny Weasley using a shield spell of some sort to deflect the bullets (crossover with HP and she used the same shield to contain the Hulk earlier in the fic), Pietro runs and grabs the kid before Ultron starts shooting... and others. Of course not all of them are in fics, most of them are in lists of how he could have survived.
I am actually tempted to write a fic where each chapters is a different way of him surviving, or one where it cliffhangers at his death and then the next chapter is a few days later and not explaining how he was saved.
(sorry for the rambling, I have a tendency to do that, especially in fics I enjoy)

Just a couple of things I noticed.
They went to South Africa to find Klaue. (not sure if I got the aue in the right order but his name's not Klaw.)
And Klaue didn't look devastated, more shocked and horrified when Ultron cut off his arm.

I love it, but what does 'lyubovka' means?

I love the way you started this fanfic! Awesome job!

is she russian?

Thank you for this amazing chapter.

Thank you.

Thank you!

Oh, poor Stark! You better watch out, because someone is coming to you. Thank you.

Sometimes it is and sometimes it's not. But who am I to disagree? I never experience it and I really don't want to in a long time of my life. Nice prologue by the way. Thank you.

loved this story, I'm glad that there is sequel waiting for me :)

I was actually a little bit disappointed by this - it showed promise early on to be something better than the usual 'twins 1' thing, but followed the same old trope in the end. Mainly, I would have loved to see more character from Maia, and for her to have more effect on the story, because right now she's just sort of there for decoration while you recount the movie, and it's not half as interesting as it could be (though I understand wanting to stick to canon, there's not really any point in adding a character is she's not going to change anything other than Pietro dying - which most people just ignore anyway).

That being said, I do like your character more than the usual decoration additions – there’s something about her that just grips you, makes you like her. Your writing is really, really good quality too – partly why I’m disappointed that the plot didn’t live up to its promises. Your little added bits, the original parts that weren’t in the movie, those were what kept me going through to the end – I loved those bits, couldn’t get enough of them (I will be reading your one shots omg). I can’t really find anything to be picky on with the actual writing – it’s engaging and flows, and your first chapter especially hooks your readers, as it should. Nice job :D

If you ever do a rewrite of this or something, I’d be very interesting in reading, and I’d love to see development of Maia and Pietro’s relationship in terms of where they stood after the experiments. There was a line in chapter 3…’this was the first time we’d truly been alone in years’, which got me thinking, is it a little strange to jump straight back into such an intimate relationship after years of being mostly kept apart and in danger? Just thought there was some potential there.

Anyway, keep writing; clichés or not, you have some serious talent and I can’t wait tosee what else you produce

You should do a story that combines Maia's story with Alice Peterson's from 'Reality Doesn't Exist'. That would be awesome.