| Reviews for In a way, he was her first |
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   The Silvernote chapter 1 . 11/4/2019 Don’t worry it wasn’t crass |
| WickedlyMinx chapter 8 . 9/10/2019 Alright, now I'm super extra caught up. Binged like there was no tomorrow. |
| Pam chapter 8 . 7/8/2019 Awww..this is sweet..! It really takes great talent to write an intimate scene without being offensively 'smutty'..! Loved it..! |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 8 . 7/7/2019 Awww |
| BuckyBarnes07 chapter 8 . 7/6/2019 I love it. |
| Jo chapter 7 . 5/14/2018 I loveed these little snippets! 33 |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 7 . 5/14/2018 Loved it |
| BuckyBarnes07 chapter 7 . 5/14/2018 That was beautifully written, I love it. |
| Pam chapter 7 . 5/14/2018 A perfect sex scene, yet no smut! Beautifully written! :) |
| channingsandoval chapter 7 . 5/13/2018 great updated thank you |
| Winter-Soldier-88 chapter 7 . 5/13/2018 Somehow, you make love scenes not cringy, so congrats on that. I found two errors, both are about the same thing. James's missing left arm. In first paragraph, he grips Aana with his "left" arm when it should have been right arm as his left has been blown away. The same thing happens in second to last paragraph as well. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/13/2018 These are really well written. They are not cringey at all. No mention of glistening members or any other cringey sex scene words. :) you could make a killing in the romance novel world with these scenes. |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 6 . 12/28/2016 Love it! |
| Isadoradreamer chapter 6 . 12/28/2016 James is so sweet! I love |
| BuckyBarnes07 chapter 6 . 12/27/2016 That was amazing, I loved it. |
