| Reviews for The final fight |
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  Sammi chapter 3 . 9/14/2019 WHAT IS WORNG WITH YOU |
| Quil chapter 3 . 6/25/2019 Wow...WHAT THE HELL?! You just fucked up my feelings with this Shit of a story having Lloyd die! |
| Annika chapter 3 . 5/7/2019 I almost cried but it was a great storie |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/10/2018 This isn’t cruel , you made me cry and it’s the middle of the night |
 Shades of X chapter 3 . 12/30/2017 Whoa. You just killed my feelings. What made the story even more awesome was that you let Garmadon mention that Lloyd actually still is a kid, since he, at this point of the cartoon, is about 13 or 14 years old... that is nearly always forgotten. Definitely one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. |
| NyaSmith2005 chapter 3 . 7/27/2017 screw u im crying |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/16/2015 This is so sad but so well written |
| 4nn4 chapter 3 . 5/15/2015 I will admit it... I cried. Well done. Now you need to write a sequel where Garmadon goes batshi7 crazy on Chen for killing his son. Keep on writing! This was a pretty strong start and I look forward to more of your work! Signing off, 4nn4 |
| SlushyGoo chapter 2 . 5/15/2015 No! Lloyd, don't die! *cries* I would not like right now you if this wasn't so well written. Great job, again! And the commas are gone! Yay! Can't wait for next one! |
| bob chapter 2 . 5/15/2015 wow...is he really died? good story! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/15/2015 chen shall die! |
| SlushyGoo chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 This is really good! You might wanna capitilize some things (but that's not so importent) and there is also that pesky commas that aren't necessary after someone spoke. Hope it helps and I can't wait to see more chapters! |
| Determined Artist chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 The story is interesting and your writing style is good. Much better then then the first chapter of my first story. (3 |
| bob chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 wow nice! |
| ambaee chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 Great job for your first story! I have seen a lot of people do worse on their first story! Their are a few things you wanna make sure to fix but overall they aren't that important. *You may want to add a little more description. This one isn't a major deal because you were descriptive enough to where I could understand what was happening. *There are a few places where you don't capitalize things that need to me capitalized but again, no big deal. Good job so far! I look forward to reading more of your work! |
