Reviews for The Fortunate Ones
jonadamson99 chapter 7 . 11/20/2019
Akano, Rayner, rosswiese,
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 5 . 12/24/2018
This entire fic is confusing to me. It bounces from place to another, and once i finally start to understand something, everything changes. Hell, i don't even know who's related to who, and how they are related.

Its like a shitty drama, twist after twist, and unnecessary surprises.
Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
Don't shove too many OCs in the story. Its makes the reader skim it and not remember who is who.
Tohka123 chapter 18 . 4/11/2017
I must say i am really enjoying this story, very unique and i enjoy his back round and family. The wedding in the previous chapter was well done especially bringing backs Akenos mother. It looks most of his sisters have been claimed besides the younger one. Hmm that cliff hanger wonder whats going to happen to Vindel.

As always keep up the hard work i enjoy the long chapters so keep up the hard work cant wait till the next!
Herr Dunkelheit chapter 18 . 4/10/2017
Harem Dante: Cynder, koneko and ophis?
contigoallday chapter 16 . 9/16/2016
Awesome
Maniacmissle chapter 16 . 9/12/2016
I loved it and it is good to have you back you have no idea how long I waited for the next chapter
Guest chapter 14 . 6/22/2016
Tiamat
contigoallday chapter 15 . 6/22/2016
Yes I can't wait to see what happens next.
contigoallday chapter 14 . 6/13/2016
An amazing story, keep up the good work. Please update soon.
contigoallday chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
I have to say that this is an amazing story.
Meaningless Us3rname chapter 5 . 3/20/2016
i have to say i really enjoy this story. its unique in a great way and i agree on your portrayal of Issei. screw him, he is a useless pervert the only girl he actually loves is Asia the other he just wants their tits. the girls would be much better suited with you awesome OC. i am confused about 2 things; first you said Dante will have a small harem but so far he has at least a dozen girls that have shown intrest in him (including Sona and Tsubaki from ch 1 and potentially Rias also from ch 3). However woth your writing a large/mega harem would actually work vwry well... My other question is that you mention Raynere visitijg with her friends and being tricked along with them. i can only assume that those are Mittelt and Kalawarner. will thay also return? i do hope so because it would be a shame for her to loose her best friends, plus there would be some history with them and could make great additions to his harem... Anyway keep up the excellent work. This is without a doubt the best DxD story ive read (and sadly ive read more than 100 of them)...Sorry if this was too long lol
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
I want Sarah, Astrea, Elle, Mine, Kotori, Jessica, Cynder, Yasaka, Tiamat, Rosweisse, Ophis, Muriel, Raynare, Mikal and Sincre to be part of the harem.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
I vote For Sarah, Astrea, Elle, Mine, Kotori, Jessica, Cynder, Yasaka, Tiamat, Rosweisse, Ophis, Muriel, Raynare, Mikal and Sincre
Guest chapter 12 . 1/9/2016
Sarah, Astrea, Elle, Mine, Kotori, Jessica, Cynder, Yasaka, Tiamat, Rosweisse, Ophis, Muriel, Kirigaya Suguha, Asuna, Sinon, Silica, Lisbeth from Sword Art Online. This is the List I want to vote for Dante's Harem
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