Sorry AugustoSpiller1259 this is the name of the boy who is translating your work I was wrong to write I was thinking about that author sorry but this is the boy that I mentioned before
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This guy is translating his story into spanish, do you have his permission to do it? because he is not giving you their respective credits as your original auror that you deserve Eduardo Uzumaki 04
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I applaud you for not making an OC for this and using a filler character.

The romance is well-done, if a bit much for my tastes. The mentorship you have with Jiraiya and Naruto is one of the best I've read.

Keep up the good work!

Great story! Update please!

The rasengan should have damaged and killed more than just one heart- they are all in his body- it’s not like one is destroyed and another heart pops out...

Love the story so far. Shizuka and Naruto are so cute together. But i hate you so much right now for not writing the fight with Orochimaru. I understand no wanting to write the same stuff that happened in canon but this clearly wasn't the same here. Hope you write it in an omake or something.

Enjoyed reading the story again with an updated chapter/s.
Good action with some great humor.
Needs more smut scenes.

Shizuka’s 13 right?

Interesting read

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Well chapter two isn't coming quickly at all. Not to mention Naruto's good day isn't happening. I'm surprised he's letting Hidan goad him so easily. This chapter's basis isn't really living up to the usual one. It's also kind of stupid that he's playing Hidan's game, fighting him like that. Also, Hidan isn't nearly fast enough to keep up with Naruto like that. Fit the first time I must say this chapter did not impress me. I mean, Naruto's chains would destroy Hidan. Honestly, the wind barrier would be enough to dismantle him. Hidan's only true bonus is that he is willing to take a hit if he can give one. You gave him fat too much credit there. I mean, nature's even been taking with Gai and Lee. Just... come on.

One thing is bothering me. About half the time it seems like Naruto's chains don't suppress chakra when you specifically stated that have before.

Stories ate rarely perfect for me. Right up my alley, as it were. This over is, and praise be to the heavens for that because I've read a string of lousy ones. You've even made his wind element interesting for me, and that was no easy task considering how overdone it is. This story is the perfect mix of comedy, romance, and action thus far.

I only wish Naruto could've smacked Sasuke with one of his new rasengan. Even if he still escaped I wanted to see Naruto bring the pain.

I've just never thought Sasuke had Naruto's potential. He's good no doubt, but he's still only just better than the average jonin without his sharingan if you ask me. I mean, his little pink eye cheat is the reason he has that taijutsu and ninjutsu.

In the end, he's training to fight one man. That creates holes in one's abilities when pit against others.

You didn't sell out by just having naruto use the book to catch kakashi off guard during the spar. I'm so proud I could poo.

FUCCKKKKKKKKKKK I WAS HOPING THEY COULD SAVE FU

Amazing story! Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!