Yay! I just read the new add on to this chapter! I still love this story and come back to reread it every now and then lol

i have no idea how to explain this story but this is certainly my first time reading something this complex. i love the complex situations involved in the forming of the countries and how peculiar everything seems to be. this is drastically au, i can tell and i absolutely love it.

I just found a jewel in here. I'm very excited by this new character and the great world she hints at to explore.
The use of various languages has many ramifications including customs and all, I can't wait to read more :)

You are awesome this is awesome thank you for making this!

This is an adorable story. Very well done.

This story knocks my socks off! Quirky, different, striking, fun and strange. And don't forget mysterious, too. I really love it and wish there was more.

Love this story, please update soon!

Loving the story, hope you continue!

This story was absolutely adorable, from the Kakashi/Fune father/daughter relationship to Fune learning two languages at once. I'm also really glad that Rin's alive and I can't wait for any further developing relationships along the way.

Good luck, nice to know this isn’t died I really do like it.

You didn't promise what you couldn't keep. This story is, in fact, full of adorableness.

*wipes fake tear away* It's beautiful!

isn't kakashi wearing gintoki's clothes in the cover? lol

this get more and more interesting and now im so hooked adding to favorites and following thanks for creating this on here for us fans of naruto to read so cant wait to see how this turns out and question if rin is alive will obito turn back to being good or is he dead in this world or is he alive but thought rin dead and went all tobito and or lost his memory and is just a tobi a good boy ninja?

wow, i love this. Im looking forward to more :).