I really enjoyed the fluff to this chapter with Tony's obvious care for everyone and how he was disturbed by the mark on Thor. Natasha was awesome with her brazenness and stubbornness. Very good confrontational chapter!

(btw, are the Star Wars references intentional? "It's a trap" and "This has bad idea written all over it" similar to "I've got a bad feeling about this" are either remarkably coincidental or are a deliberate reference, but either way, I enjoyed them!)

Games of Thrones reference? A lot of dehumanizing going on (although Loki is not supposed to be human). Anyway, well done. I will continue.

AWWWWWW THE FEELS!
Sorry. I’m composed now. I love your work, please continue!

Yay! Don’t stop now! ️️️️️️

Good. I’m sticking to short sentences here, but it’s all great.

Even more awww

Aww. Poor Clint.

so sad

I like it...makes me sad to see Loki like that, though. Good job writing ️️

Woah.

I'm back! And I love this chapter, Hulk is soo sweet ;)

Love the bubble dancing and Mitt flopper :)

It' and i gotta sleep but I can't , this story is a page (?) turner

Tony and Pepper was so cute! And I loved the way you wrote Tony, his characterization was perfect, hope the wedding was nice :)

Fascinating, that Nat - the Avenger who is the least 'feely' is the one for Loki, and she is learning to like support him? And you show it in a subtle way that is sad, but so creative! And I understand the repetition, it makes perfect sense