i think this is a good story so far even if it doesn't match up with OotP... update please!

this is a really good fanfiction definatley one of the better ones i have read (and i read a lot of them) the only thing is some of the teachers are different then in the actual story but i guess that would be the whole pre-OOTP things. also in the book hagrid gives harry it shows a picture of lily and james wedding and it seems like a bigger one than described (if arabella figg was that old in wouldnt she be like dead in harrys time?)

congrats - v. good

Just Brilliant! You need to work on being less insecure. Sybill is great, I don't love her for obvious reasons, and I admit I don'y know her that well but I don't think that's particulary important. I love the Lily/James scenes, I don't read enough L/J's where they have a reasonably healthy relationship. Please plough on because I love it so far, thanks for a great read

-E

P.s, I found this story recomenned on the Hidden Tower, thought you'd want to know.

wow, the writing was exellent, but it was depressing. I am looking foward to reading the rest of your work.

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