Wow, this is amazing! I love Mr. Roary, it's just so cute! I can't wait for the next chapter, things are going to get very interesting from now on.
Bye :)

omg! so funny
. Especially that crazy-ass Uchiha, he thought with a shiver running up his back. That boy with his "My body moved on its own" thing had nearly frightened him to death. He was definitely too reckless for his own good.

and really sweet the goodnight to sasuke toy,lol

Nice one. Hope 4 more soon.

Mr. Roary is my favorite character by far, oh my dear goodness it's just too precious. Knowing that it's a collab between Gweatherwax and fangirlandiknowit already tells me this story will be amazing. And you've proven it so far by writing this awesome retelling of everything in just one chapter.

I can't wait for more!

How to recap at least three story arcs in a chapter, a book written by Gweatherwax and FangirlandIknowit.

So far, best chara goes to Mr. Roary because that name just screams winner. :D

So basically, these first couple chaps are a quick catch up plus you guys' personal twists until we eventually veer off to a hopefully better focused storyline than canon? Hell yes!

oh my god. sasuke and mr raory are just toooooooooooooooo cute!

i'm writing this in english cos i know emily doesn't speak portuguese like you do, sooo...

i really like how you rushed the whole wave arc (and the beggining, really). i get sooo tired when i read a alternative au that only really changes things after the wave arc, but they write everything up till the chinnin exams. so it was like a breath of fresh air.

and i can totally see this is going to the direction of sasuke and naruto being trained by jiraya, which will totally be awesome. and glad to see it. cos it's really annoying how no one seems to think it's a good idea in their fics to use it. I mean, if you really wanna stop sasuke going to orochimaru, the logical thing would be to give him another sannin (and lets be honest here, tsunade would never really be a choice, not for sasuke, anyway, at least, not in kishimoney's - really liked this name hehehe - world, cos he's all mysoginist and shit.

i would comment more, but i gotta go, so i'll leave more reviews in the future.

but i'm loving it already, and hope to read more soon (as well as all yours [the both of you, cos you both are awesome writers] other stories).

cheers.

Update!