This is so sweet! This shows that how much she respects him in that she didn't totally invade his privacy when he was defenseless. As always, very well done!

Loved it!

I can just see this happening - and I love how thoughtful and respectful Phryne is here. I truely think she would have been, and that the look she gives him when she tells him "after I undressed you" is (mostly) just to tease. Surely she would have needed help undressing an unconsious man!

And I agree - don't strip the bed Mr. B!

I like your take on this. Characters are true to form, and Phryne is respectful:her inner dialogue is just right. You are multifaceted! I believe you also made some of my favorite fan videos.

I just love this missing scene, you naughty, naughty girl! Jack with no undershirt, LOL! I can just imagine Phryne having impure thoughts while undressing Jack. Nicely done!

oh, yes, we would have all loved to see that!

Love this... Shows the turn in Phryne's thinking in a quiet, believable way, while also filling in the gaps on what we all wanted to see. Very much in character and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing this - hope getting it off your chest helps with the block!

I do love your take on the missing scene. No singlet - how wanton of our Jack! And just the right splash of spice. I laughed at her discovery that he 'was worth the wait'. And you are absolutely right; it definitely is Phryne's room, although I must say I've not noticed the second door to the right of her bed before. Thank you for the brief sojourn, now back to Kurrajong...

I'm glad you elected to get this out of your system; I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Also, I hope it did help release your block "on the Kurrajong front" because I am enjoying watching that one unfold as well.

I love it. So tender. It is interesting that you chose to have Jack not wear an undershirt; an element of surprise and a lot of sexiness. If you would have had him go commando too, it certainly would have driven many to the brink!

*sigh* how I wish we saw what happened...your fic is just as good though! Loved this.

So glad you needed to get this out of your system. It was quite lovely. Phryne's thoughts as she undressed Jack - definitely worth the wait!

O yes - Jack is certainly a no undershirt man! Quite lovely.

Being in the US, I can only make some presumptions & guesses & perhaps some wishful thinking :-). I'm currently watching season 1 on TV, but have seen through the end of season 2...they're just re-running MFMM, maybe until we get season 3 here? Anyway, thanks for something to whet my appetite (like I needed to increase my interest in all things Phryne & Jack...).

Do NOT strip the bed, Mr B! I'd have to say it. Oh my. That was lovely. Jack will definitely be worth the wait. SWOONING over here.