Wow, this is just... This is so beautiful, and enlightening, and such poetry that I will forever hold in my heart. The pretty words, the strings in the sentences, the burning emotion clear with every syllable that passes.
I love how you recreated the characters without straying too much from canon. I love how you spin their thoughts, their memories, their actions all together to create one beautiful artistic mess. I love how you write, the words, the quotes, and even from the titles and the formatting. I love how you narrate it so simple yet pleasingly complex in a direction to the other.
Your every word just enraptures me from the very first word to the very last period; and I can't even think about skipping anything, be it a small exclamation point or a whole word.
Keep on writing, you have such a clever mind and too much talent to partner it with. I'll be awaiting for more.

They always call her insensitive, with a heart as hard as stone;
She couldn't, wouldn't, tell them, that it's her sad way to atone.

They also said she's too childish, she believes in the tales of old;
She listens to their anger with a Mona Lisa smile to behold.

They yell that she's too kind-hearted, with golden tears to spill;
She wiped her tears and told them, "I simply wanted to feel."

"Feel what?" They asked, with a touch of curiosity in their eyes.
"Feel love. Feel hate. I want to feel everything. It's nice."

I just want to have KHR throwback. And come again to this fic. Ghosh this is so beautiful!

а проды нет? где прода так интересно!

I think Skul first would be cool.

im still waiting for the grand update. reborn now knows!

Please update this story.

First of all, can I just say how AMAZING THIS STORY IS?! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I Adore Tsuna's Empathic abilities! In particular I love the detail you went into for explaining Kawahira and reinventing his entire backstory! I honestly love Giotto as a cat too, probably cause I have a cat and will probably grow up to be a crazy cat lady. And to answer your questions...

1) I love the quotes, I feel like they add another layer to the story. They can be a bit distracting but it works out surprisingly well in the end.

2) I'm personally fine with the lack of dialogue since the character building has been pretty good without it. It's a lot better than not having any dialogue or having an excess of it. I also feel like the fact that Tsuna isn't really talkative plays well with the lack of dialogue since it brings more meaning to what he does say. But there should probably be more speech in Ryohei's part since he's a very EXTREME guy who loves his EXTREME speech, you know?

3) Fon would be the best to introduce first, I think. Since if you follow the original way that characters are introduced, Fon could easily come in with I-Pin or even be introduced as he visits Kyoya or something. Additionally, he's the most seemingly calm of the lot, I think it's best to ease Tsuna into the Arcobaleno. Skull could be introduced with Mukuro after though? As he could easily be possessed or something. Then, I guess with the Varia arc it would be easy to go with the cannon and introduce Colenello and Lal with Viper.

But that's only if you stick with Cannon though so I guess it's your call Author-san. Hope this was helpful even in the least. Again I'd just like to say, I Adore This So Much and Really hope this continues for a while unlike others I read where they just forever Hiatus. I really look forward to any new chapters! I'm especially looking forward to the Mukuro arc! Thanks for coming up with this beautiful work! Hope to see more soon~!

(side note, I'm proof reading this real quick and my english teacher is not proud, but I'm too lazy to fix any of my mistakes rn so sorry about that)

This is a breath-taking story. So heartbreaking, yet beautiful. T_T

please update.
Your story is very good.
made me cry

I'm not sure if you'll come back to this or not, but you are a lovely writer and I appreciate your stories. Even if you don't, you did a wonderful job. Thank you for sharing.

I came here after i read asphodels. Aaand this story is Amazing with capital A. You, author, really have skill to make me cry a river. Really:" .I know you maybe not see my comment but still, I hope you are doing fine.
Thank you authoooorr

I cried so much, I really want to know what happens next but at the same time i hate crying. I hope you start writing again though.

im crying pls UPDATE

I think it’s just me who doesn’t understand what reborn used as a bullet. Is it still the DW bullets or nah?

Too bad it isn’t updated for very long time. It was an awesome story.